It was such a dramatic reveal that it took out the shock of their civilian identities and put it straight into the angst. Wow.

So sweet! I like how her parents knew and let Adrien stay.

I don't even have words.

You are breaking me.

Wow.

Okay.

I'm kind of broken right now.

I had to go and ask my art teacher for a hug halfway through chapter two. Thtas how much this affected me.

Beautiful. You had my heart wrenching. Thanks for the wonderful story.

That was extremely heart warming.

oh my god so fucking cuuutte

The best!

AHHHH! THE FLUFF! THE ANGST! THE REVEALS! AHHHH! THE THE FEEEEEEEEEEELS!

**SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!** omg, I loved it! so sweet, deep, sad, fun, I loved every word!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
*dies repeatedly*
THIS.
THIS.
WHAT.
MY HEART AND FEELS.
I LOVE IT.
JUST WOW :0
*hands you infinite cookies* I'm sorry for my slightly coherent babbling. It's three in the morning, and I'm STILL procrastinating on homework that I'm supposed to turn in for my first period class tomorrow. T-T But if procrastinating leads to the discovery of stories like THIS, then I'm more than okay with that. And staying up so late that I'm not sure I'll even wake up to turn in that homework... That I still haven't done.

Okay, but in all seriousness. By far the most amazingly touching fic that I've read in months. BY FAR. The way you write is so amazing, and this story's entire idea was just as amazing. Everyone was in character. The reactions were written perfectly. Dialogue was awesome. I'm literally going to melt into a puddle on my bed. Thank you for this super miraculous story! :)

Didn't I leave a review on this fic? I meant to, maybe I did but it didn't work. I'll try again.
This fic was so beautiful. It ranges from one end of the spectrum to the other: so sad, and then so happy, and both hurt my heart. At first I was really worried that you would kill off Marinette; then I was worried that her suffering would be gratuitous. It wasn't - sure, you didn't shy away from how serious her injuries were, nor from portraying the situation in a realistic way. Besides not glossing over the gritty details, you didn't make it too unnecessarily gory, either.

The backstory was fascinating: how Hawkmoth has been defeated, his identity revealed, Adrien left all alone, Marinette distancing herself from him out of guilt. And the way you wrote Adrien's reaction - compared to what she went through, I think he suffered even more! His utter devotion to her was both heart-warming and heart-rending. The way everyone behaved - Alya with incredible tact, Nino exasperated at Adrien, Tom so understanding towards his daughter's partner, Sabine scared and in denial - it was all so perfect, very in-character in every instance, but not predictably so. That line near the end, about Adrien 'living on the precipice of her actions', was absolutely stunning.
My one criticism is that you overuse the word 'some' - I mean, you use it some, and then some! You really don't need you use it the way you did, or at least not as often. Otherwise, this fic was really spectacular - every time I re-read it, the emotional impact doesn't lessen at all, I can't decide whether to smile or cry over it!

Yes! This was beautiful! I loved it so much!