This is good. Update please!

I am loving this story! Please update soon!

I'm really excited to see where this story goes! The first two chapters are already so wonderfully written and full of emotion :")

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Hahaha Zoro. I can't believe he's lost already...well on second thought, yes i can. I think Franky's the only one left. I wonder where he turned up :)

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For someone that can't stand future/past mashup fics, I REALLY enjoyed reading this. Extremely well written; good job!

Love iiiittt! Why u no update?

This is kind of awesome. I'm flailing a lot.

I love it. I hope you haven't abandoned this story, the beginning is awesome and I would love to read the rest of you find the inspiration. Thank you for writing.

this looks interesting update soon

This is an amazing story really original and creative and your writting is quite good please update soon looking forward to read the interaction between the two luffys and his brothers
-Lili

Oh my gosh! I'm loving this! I hope you come back to it soon!

This story is well-written, with long chapters, likeable verisons of all the Strawhats, and a style of writing that makes it very easy to picture the body language of the characters, which is so important and yet often neglected.

Plus your grammar is solid, which is such a rarity in this fandom. Bless your soul for putting commas in all the right places!

I knew I would like it when you started with "I'm just writing a story I'd want to read", and I was right! This is the best ASL-focused One Piece fic I've read, I just wish there was more! I was waiting with bated breath for Nami to catch on to the irregularites and realize something's up, other than their 'teleportation'.

And damn I want to see Sabo and Ace (maybe just Sabo, since he's the only one that really gets what's going on) get bug eyed at the badass crew their little brother's will collect- they haven't even seen Chopper, or Franky, or Robin's powers yet! And you've set the baseline for a major conflict on Goa island too... this could be an awesome longer story.

So if you have the time and/or inclination, you'd make me a very happy reader by writing another chapter!

so we've found Sanji, Chopper, Robin, Nami, Luffy, Brook, and Usopp. We had found Zoro, but then lost him. So the missing are Franky and Zoro.
I look forward to where you go with this