Reviews for A Birthday Present
bellefantastique chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
LOVE this!

You managed to get across a real friendship without making it too sentimental!

Misile chapter 1 . 4/8/2007



-gigglesnort- I absolutely lurved les ending.

Incredibivle. Thanks for writing it!


illyria-pffyffin chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
Oh, what a very well-written sweet fluffiness! My only complaint is the disappearance of Frodo mid-story. He and Pearl made the beginning really enjoyable. But the shift to Pip and Merry had also been worth it. You capture reliable!Merry and impulsive!Pip very well. Thanks for sharing this. I really enjoyed it.
DreaminofLorien chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
hell-whim chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
Aw, that was adorable! I really love the dynamic of Merry and Pippin. (And who doesn't love throwing apples at people?) What can I say? You got me to laugh out loud (and at the library, too), which is very difficult to do, believe me!
Anyhow, jolly good fun! And thanks for the review on my story.
Ocelot chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
Funny and adorable! I greatly enjoyed that!
Pansy Chubb chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
I love this little story. "You're sentimental tonight, aren't you?" "It happens." Love those lines, nothing too mushy.
Crypticelfdreamer Idril chapter 1 . 2/19/2003
Of all the fics I've read, I have never encountered one as well-written, sweet, enjoyable, or brilliant as this one. (Honestly!) It is truly wonderful! Just thought I'd tell you, cause I know how good it feels for people to tell ya when you're doing something right, and you certainly are doing something right!
honest iago chapter 1 . 2/6/2003
*sobs* that was just wonderful!

as if i wasn't already in love with Merry enough!

i haven't read anything along those lines before.

original, adorable, and really well written.

well done. (and thank you!).

jedi-hobbit chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
Ah, this is sooo sweet! I love Merry and Pippin.

I couldn't stop smiling while reading this.
midgewood58 chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
Oh, that was just all sorts of wonderful. Alas for poor Pippin that he's so unhappy, and good for poor Pippin that he has a great friend like Merry. You did a marvelous job with writing their friendship! :)
Pervinca T chapter 1 . 1/29/2003
Ha! How cute! These little Merry/Pippin one-parters are the best. I like the image of them tossing fruit at party-goers. Very amusing. :)
Juno21 chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
hehe... merry and pippin...u gotta love 'em! lol- anyways..such a funny, awesome, cute story! that apple game, sounds fun...i wanna play too! *grabs apple and chucks it at brother* HA! got him in the head! lol-l8a!

neoli chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
Awww...that was funny, adorable and cute..also realistic! Wonderful job here.

Vie chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Ahahahahh! Oh that's absolutely adorable and hillarious! I loved it!
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