Reviews for Collapse
avilasamantha chapter 1 . 5/6
As I was reading, I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story is rich with visual potential, and I’d love to help bring that to life. Whether it’s an intense, action-packed sequence or a quiet , emotional beat, your work deserves to be experienced in a way that captures its full depth and energy.
Jsmine Lucas chapter 1 . 11/26/2024
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ssshaha chapter 3 . 3/5/2017
This is so interesting, I love it!
Neuron-x chapter 11 . 11/28/2016
whoa things are getting very intense! Does this mean Grimmjow and Ichigo are going to be stuck with just one another in the next chapter? I can see that ending well...
Hollowfied Borg chapter 11 . 11/15/2016
Wow, I think this is the closest someone has come to having the "assimilation plot" of Yhwach come into fruition! Yet the protagonists still have 5 days... I guess we'll just have to see what happens next.
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 11 . 11/15/2016
Ichigo is going to go berserk for them hurting hime
Neuron-x chapter 10 . 9/17/2016
I'm glad to see Askin again! He is a very interesting character and I too got the feeling there was more to him and his 'loyalty' to Yhwach. I had hope to see his past explained in the manga.
Aha, it kind of makes me laugh to see how angry Grimmjow gets every time someone mentions how 'special' Ichigo be a little bit of jealously there, eh Grimm? But his angry is understandable in some respect; many of the characters are used as pedestals for Ichigo and that is kind of frustrating.
Good chapter!
ymora826 chapter 10 . 9/13/2016
Excellent chapter as always. I liked how you added dialogue of Nel and grimmjow concerning ichigo. I also love how you write urahara in a dark light which in my opinion, kubo should have done in the manga
Red Okra chapter 9 . 8/25/2016
This is such an interesting story! Grimmjow and Nel are my favorite arrancas and I'm happy to see a story centering the two of them (tbh after reading the ending I was disappointed not to see what actually happened to them along with Urahara and co). This is also such an intruiging take on the last arc; I'd love to see what you have in store for the next few chapters. :)
Neuron-x chapter 9 . 8/13/2016
Another great chapter! Grimmjow is determined not to co-operate with anyone isn't he?
Neuron-x chapter 8 . 7/23/2016
I really love Riruka here! And Yukio's completely blunt honesty cracked me up.

Oh, are Grimmjow's less human features starting to disappear along with his powers? Could that be the change in his hair colour? I find it really hard to imagine him with any other colour than blue...

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anatonia Barcelona chapter 8 . 7/18/2016
This is a very neat story; definitely one of the more interesting I've read as of late involving my favorite ill-tempered Espada. The only note I would give is to mind the spelling of Spanish words (like "hierro" or "Cuatra"), just because the spelling/pronunciation can change it's meaning.

Again, loving it and looking forward to an update!
~Ana
StreakingHerculobus chapter 2 . 7/3/2016
Very dramatic. A quality story
Gwen chapter 7 . 6/25/2016
I have read and reread this fic and oh my gosh. ... didn't get any work done for a while
I like the idea of a humanified Grimmjow and Nel. Evil quincy king being evil and twisted ideas ... this could be Canon :-D
Ulquiorra9000 chapter 5 . 6/11/2016
Another interesting chapter :) So even Orihime's rejection has its limits.
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