Just found this story and really enjoyed it! So many possible directions you could take this! Sadly I also saw the last update time and hope your muse strikes again on this one! Best of luck! Thanks for a great beginning!

Interesting story although Young Griff is clearly a Blackfyre and Jon is clearly a trueborn Targaryen.

Ghost was never the runt of the litter, that’s show only nonsense.

Loved it ! Thank you for your work on this story, it's very detailed and well-written. I hope you're doing okay 3

Well… that’s it I guess.

if it's abandoned please notify the readers, this was good.

fuck you

Pretty interesting story bro but it looks u drop it or something when the plot getting interesting plus will like the Jon bedding the queen or meet gold company’s a.k.a fake aegon plus meet ashara dayne that is septa if that truly her take her as lover as hope Jon learn his true heritage take care.

'Likely to be epic length', said the author too brain dead to look past their own nose.

This was a great read, I wish there was more to read.

Angsty Jon strikes again! What emotion will Jon feel about this totally unrelated thing next? Will he be melancholic, gloomy, timid, spineless, pessimistic or just plain stupid? Wait and see in the next episode of the popular "poor abused orphan who is meaninglessly angsty because the author doesn't know of other ways to make their reader feel emotionally attached" trope!

ahhhh! what?! what a twist that chapter turned out to be. thus is great so far. thank you

I've always wanted to see a fic where Robert finds out and gives up the throne to Lyannas son. Maybe this we be as close as I get.

I'm gonna say it now. The word choice and flow is amazing. Some, if not the best I've seen and I've read hundreds of fics.

I hope you pick this up again in the future, I love your version of Jon Snow, doesn't hurt that Cersei x Jon is a guilty pleasure for me