Reviews for Harry Potter and the Elemental Nations
Lilypad1820 chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
You could always try both? A serious plot with some lighthearted bits or a Lighthearted plot with some Sirius bits...Get it:) Haha, sorry... tired -_-; well written and I can't wait to read more.
yngoldfogee chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
I've enjoyed this and hope you do decide to continue this, and soonish.
Dreamwind1 chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
This was a really good start. I'm very interested in seeing where you go with this.
Halfway To Reality chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
Really great story idea. I love how you've written this so far. If I was to suggest anything I would leave out everything after harry asks where he is at the end. The explanation can be glossed over or expanded on in the next chapter but it shouldn't be just summarized like that. there is too much potential for character building and comedy.
davycrockett100 chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
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