Reviews for Game On! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story.. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story It's refreshingly new in concept, but not in an awkward way. The plot is good and the interaction of the characters is acceptable, if flat at times. However, I have to ask the author if he/she turned off the grammar help. While in the spoken text "..." the punctuation is good, in the normal text it is neglected. In addition, the names of the person addressed/speaking are sometimes missing, which leads to a simply unnecessary guessing game. Despite these problems, I think the story is definitely worth reading. Thanks for that, Author-sama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() every time you mention Padfoot, I get all soft and sappy about Sirius deliberately deciding to stay with Kazami instead |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would be pretty cool to see this mc go to FFX or FFX-2 considering her soul powers and other abilities, it seems like the perfect world and job system for her to work with, she also reminds me somewhat of Yuna mixed with Rikku. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ruined it already, good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it!thanks for the amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second time reading this story 3 You’re a great author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should replace 'explication' with 'explanation' in this chapter, both of them. Explication is more to analyse something, wether that's an idea, a text or what have you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If skelegrow exists why can’t they regrow organs. They can remake limbs (ie wormtail) and help splinching victims so why not new organs |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re-reading your stories from the beginning again, I can't help but wonder if Kazami's box weapon was intentional foreshadowing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() welp fun while it lasted I guess sorry about not wanting to finish this but once I saw the party system as a reward I just couldn't feel the need to read this anymore sad too because the comments pulled me in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coming back to the very beginning to read all of these again. I just love them so much! You're a fantastic author and these are all fantastic stories. Keep up the great work!3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad to have found this, this is a pearl, I cant believe I didnt stumble upon it before now! |
![]() ![]() This story has been really good so far. You handle the gamer aspect in a way I really enjoy. Thanks for the great story! |