Reviews for The XCOM Viper
Guest69 chapter 29 . 5/9/2017
Sweet Jesus man this is the most indepth and awsome Xcom fanfic ive come across. I mean the character development and interactions, the building romance, the comedy, it is all so excelent mate. I hade barely blew through all these chapters, and then That F*┬┐ing plot twist in this chapter. Bravo man, bravo. Heres to the continuation of this fic and all your awsome writing. Till next time.
Guest chapter 29 . 5/9/2017
was 29 the last one otherwise holy shit damn god
good story
dan chapter 4 . 5/8/2017
good story hope to see more
Elder chapter 29 . 5/8/2017
Me: Reads Reviews - Bursts into laughter at all the terrible puns
But on a serious note
WHAT THE F*** JUST HAPPENED?
I need a new god damn head because this blew my mind
Mystery Guy chapter 29 . 5/8/2017
Keep going with this, it's great! Even though I'm not into romance this is still captivating.
All morning I burst laughter, muttering, 'Bang.'
AnotherOneBitesTheDusts chapter 29 . 4/29/2017
please PLEASE update its so good its like a glazed donut(i think that how u spell it but they are my favorite like this story)
this is the best story i have ever readed please contiune this i beg of you i just got done with the story and it has been so AWESOME!
i love the moments between mercy and hawkeye it is so lovely
Guest chapter 29 . 4/29/2017
Why do I get the feeling that we are going to learn later on that Mercy is actually the daughter of both the Commander and the viper Amelie (Hierarch Mother)?
white1498 chapter 29 . 4/28/2017
Well I ship the Hawkeyes x mercy and the commander x viper shipping those are really great ships and also please for the love of all that's holy knock mercy the fuck up with Hawkeyes.
Guest chapter 29 . 4/25/2017
hey I just started reading this fanfic and I just want to say... I love it the story is amazing and the characters are amazing and it's a lot of fun to read it...that's all I have to say hope you will keep doing this fanfic :)
LordRevan0400 chapter 1 . 4/22/2017
WARNING: BRAIN GENERATORS 1-7 SHUTTING DOWN! LOGIC AND REASONING PROCESSORS OVERLOADING! INITIATE FUCK THIS SHIT IM OUT PROTOCAL IN 5...4...3...2...1 Lol. but on a serious note, you blew my fucking mind!
Guest chapter 29 . 4/20/2017
I CALLED IT

but now im sad

becouse i might be seeing the beginning of the end

of one of the worlds best fanfic
I'm Solo chapter 29 . 4/20/2017
Ok. I'll admit that was not something I saw coming. Now I just want another chapter even more.
Heedfulconch3 chapter 29 . 4/19/2017
...

bullshit...

I... call... bullshit...

Not just any old bullshit, exotic bullshit from a very rare and unique species of bull, refined and processed to the greatest imaginable level of bullshit...

You glorious bastard! I hate you so much for that twist... Take my likes, or upvotes, or whatever other ways of liking you have...

Seriously... that fucking twist... you managed to paint the Heirach Mother as an almost psychotically affectionate captor to the commander, an antagonist in every sense of the word, and then you pull a motherfucking "Beauty and the beast"...

Fuck this man... i'm going to put a link to this story on Reddit, on every XCOM subreddit I can find, along with every facebook XCOM page... because fuck you man... You played me like a god damn fiddle and I love you for it...
Guest chapter 29 . 4/18/2017
Great work.

I was truly convinced that the Heiarch Mother was truly the enemy of XCOM. Great job. I love the characters and their unique personalities.
Keep on posting.
Anonymous chapter 29 . 4/18/2017
So was the love an act or does she really love the commander? That is the only question I have everything else was fantastic.
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