Reviews for The XCOM Viper
Daronius95 chapter 3 . 2/25/2016
Primus1243 chapter 3 . 2/25/2016
You know what's funny, I have the same exact layout for the sections of the chapter in one of my stories. And even more funny, it's RWBY. Though the reason I think you have longer chapters is more characters than other stories on the section. You got the commander, the viper and Hawkeye. That seems enough to line up three lines of stories with two combining into one and back into two at the same time and combine and separate without much trouble. That's good. And I should know, I have around like 10k to 12k words each chapter.

Also that message, yeah, we aren't going to do much without a cipher to follow and the only thing I am making out is AVATAR FACILITY and that could mean the location of the main facility is getting closer.

One more thing...who really started the commander as a GREMLIN in the first place? (Side note: GREMLIN is capitalized because that is how the subtitles in the game place it as.)
Talethicus chapter 3 . 2/24/2016
I believe I can pick out the beginning to be along the line of 'Message Received, do what you can' and a small part near the end to be 'as soon as possible'. The rest has me pretty well stumped.

As to who is sending these transmissions, they are random informants around the world or the only character you've introduced that is outside of the Avenger. The Hierarch Mother.
Onsholo chapter 2 . 2/23/2016
No not really,she is annoying,hoping that she dies.
Grama0226 chapter 2 . 2/23/2016
AWSOME! Thank you for writing this i personaly enjoyd this. But one question, in this fiction are the Vipers their own speices, like their own civilizatrion or are they created by the elders? P.S Countinue! :D
Denapekka chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
At last!
a OCxViper-fic and an author with notable experience in writing! Looks good to me so far!
I've noticed the several, good-sized stories you have already written and I've high hopes for this story.
And I agree, let love take it's time and grow. That way, the end result will be much more satisfying!
Phoenix Champion chapter 2 . 2/21/2016
Whoo! New Chapter, and so soon too!
Keep it up
Phoenix Champion chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Finally, and Xcom OCxViper fic that actually has a decent Chapter length.
Keep it up please, we gotta get this trend running faster and faster.
thedibonner chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Gotta say, you can make almost anything work, This if the first good XCom fic I have ever seen, hoping to see more of all your fics
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