Reviews for The XCOM Viper
Latios chapter 12 . 3/16/2020
Beautiful I love the part when he accidentally puts he's hand on Mercy's hehe hum berger
shinghidorah chapter 30 . 2/3/2020
holy shit dude.. you just literally blew my mind; especially chapter 29! my god, I never thought she was a mole, not by a longshot! but seriously, it's been almost two years since your last update and I really love the way the story is going..
something big is gonna happen, and I can't wait to find out if you plan on updating it this year
Drago The Firesword Dragon chapter 27 . 1/11/2020
So, because I have already reviewed the next chapter, here's another referring to a thing on the next chapter.

White Buffalo. Halo Wars 2 trailer.

Just realised it.
Genesis1212 chapter 18 . 12/19/2019
I Love how clueless Mercy is with other people and their customs.

Not to mentioned its not rushed in any way shape or form which I respect greatly considering many romances happen within 10 chapters or so.

You treat it as a side story and not part of the main story everything is intentional and meaningful. Love this story!
Genesis1212 chapter 12 . 12/15/2019
They were left there for over 20 years?! Whoa I wonder how self aware they are truly are.

This was a damn good chapter! I hope out 2 new friends make it out and live for a long time!
Genesis1212 chapter 6 . 12/13/2019
Wow this is an interesting devolopment. So happy to be invested in this story!
Genesis1212 chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
Yeah rushed romance is crappy story telling good on you for priorities.

I like how you incorporate what I assume are game mechanics (gremlin talking to the agents as well as the OP being viewed from an elevated location as well as being broadcasted for people to 'see' into the narrative in a believable way.
Genesis1212 chapter 1 . 12/12/2019
First Xcom fic on here for me well written and very curious I never personally played XCOM but Im told ita very good strategy game similar to Valkeria Chronicles which I adore.

As for the subject matter Im a sucker for a good romance story between species so fave and like from me!
Drago The Firesword Dragon chapter 28 . 8/21/2019
So this is for the next chapter, but since I already have one posted there I can't post another, so it's going here. I can't wait for someone to go "Can we stop using that figure of speech? The aliens aren't getting the point!" when someone says "Sweet mother of mercy".

That was your idea from the start, right?

Hey, at least Mercy finally understands.
Drago The Firesword Dragon chapter 7 . 8/19/2019
Tell me you did not make a Stormtrooper joke.
Da Ninja Dude chapter 30 . 7/30/2019
I'm pretty sure the speaker is a viper or thin man to be exact. He's got scales on his neck and if you look really close to his eyes, you'll see they are a tiny like the thin man's. He also wears glasses suspiciously similar to them too.
Da Ninja Dude chapter 29 . 7/30/2019
Execute order 66
Drago The Firesword Dragon chapter 30 . 7/3/2019
Was that a Star Wars The Clone Wars 2003 reference with the new Advent General?
Drago The Firesword Dragon chapter 29 . 7/3/2019
I like how I read this chapter on the 4th of July :P.
MarioDS01 chapter 30 . 6/21/2019
Wow...surprised this ended in a cliffhanger. Hope there is indeed the sequel...maybe.
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