|Reviews for Chasing Foolish Dreams|
| A reader chapter 8 . 8/2/2018
This fanfiction tastes bittersweet. Please continue on, please add a large dose of angst please. It makes everything taste better.
| Deo Cairde chapter 8 . 4/16/2018
Omg I loved the first one, and now Im finding myself loving this fanfic too! I hope you find time to update! This is really good.
| Flickered Raven chapter 7 . 2/3/2018
Motherfucking manipulative bastard Mephisto.
Dont you ducking dare turn Amaimon against Rin or Rin against Amaimon. I swear, Samael, I will fucking climb into your office thing and murder all the pieces of your 'game'.
Anyway, great story!
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/20/2017
I am thoroughly enjoying reading this story more than the previous one, good plot, when is the next chapter? I want to read more
| ScarletSaphire chapter 7 . 6/8/2017
Too lazy to log in but AAAAAAA IT UPDATED! YOU UPDATED! MY LIFE IS GOOD! THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU HEAVENLY SAINT FOR NOT FORGETTING THIS FIC THANK YOU SO MUCH! I GIVE YOU PRESENTS OF KIND WORDS CAPS LOCK AND LOTS OF EXCLAMATION POINTS! Also, have fun in Japan.
| NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 7 . 6/1/2017
I can't wait for another update!
This is so good!
It's so interesting and filled with suspense!
And oh no Rin has his illness back!
What's gonna happen next?
This is so awesome!
I love it!
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/25/2017
Mmm, need moar! MOAR! I need, mooooaaaaarrrrr! 333
| PRICESS Citten chapter 7 . 5/24/2017
Wow! Lucky! I always wanted to visit but I don't speak the language so it wouldn't be as fun :(
| MidnightRide129 chapter 6 . 11/27/2016
Love this so much! So happy u updated! Can't wait tonfobd out what happens on the next chapter! And I'd love to see your chibi drawings!
| Jonescalypso chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
I think it'd be cool if you had Rin hold some kind of dominion over lesser demons that weren't considered worthy enough to be kin to royal blood in Gehenna. Rin always struck me as the kind who would sympathize with anyone or anything that felt unwanted or inferior, and since he doesn't appear to feel like he fully belongs in either the human or the demon world, I can easily see him try to make his own way, regardless of what his relatives consider appropriate or entirely respectable.
I don't have a particular species in mind but it could be multiple kinds, and that would give you freedom to get creative with creature types :)
Also, I'd recommend trying to think outside the box in terms of Rin's power. He clearly has blue flames like their father, but I imagine that to be different than whatever Iblis has, so I wouldn't put too much into his specialty in terms of fire itself. Rather, I'd try brainstorming something that makes USE of his flames or can be represented by them indirectly. For example, he could be called the Demon King of Change or Conversion or something (based on the sciences of how heat and flame plays a part in turning a material or substance into something else - But really it can refer to how he might change things around him for the better of everyone, not just to better suit those more powerful.) Sort of a double-meaning thing. Just as Mephisto's title is broad enough for many possibilities, it could be the same for Rin. That would work with the fact that he's always been of special interest to the demons, as well as reflect Mephisto's influence over him all this time.
| ScarletSaphire chapter 6 . 11/21/2016
HOLY MOTHER OF MARSHMALLOWS, YOU'RE BACK! It's fine, school and extracurricular stuff does that to everyone. What's important is you haven't forgotten! Thanks for the update, and fillers are okay, just as long as it isn't 100% filler. Then that's kind of annoying. Anyway, glad to see you're back at it!
| Junko-chanisdangerous chapter 6 . 11/19/2016
Yo! Thank you very much for updating! This story is very interesting. I wouldn't mind being a beta for ya.
| Yukio Mustang chapter 6 . 11/19/2016
it's okay, happy to read this update though!
| a meowing cat chapter 5 . 10/6/2016
I would love to see another chapter. I loved the original and this one is great as well.
| Demitri-Landgravate chapter 5 . 8/5/2016
OKay! I would love it for you to continue! I would love Rin to have water or dark creatures.