A real interesting way to look at Herpo the foul... and it makes the others look more cruel then Herpo... at least in the beginning.
Well done.
Ebenbild

Wow! Dark and scary and sad, all at once! Young Snape would have found a kindred spirit in Herpo, even to losing his chance with the sweet, pretty girl. Well done, Tinderblast!

That owned, 10/10, ].

creepy...lol

hi, i just read your story and i like it

i hope you do a other one