Reviews for The Hotline
lw117149 chapter 5 . 8/2/2016
Oh no poor spidey his phone will not stop ringing willit? More please whe you get the chance.
SneezySoul chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
augh snoopers auuuuuughhhhhh makes me angry

And I laughed a lot with the sticky note thing; It reminds me of when I was little, and gotten a hold of some of my parent's stack of sticky notes. Made the best stickers, I tell you! xD

And awe, Jack's a total fan haha. I don't blame him! owo
Dragon Courage chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
so, spideys about to get fan calls, lol
FrostedDragonHeart chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
Yay! A small break through with another officer. John, getting to see the kinder side of New York and giving Spidey a small chance. That was wonderful. I also love how, even though Spidey is insanely nervous, he's still able to find fun in pulling this prank on Jack! I also adore how the officer's keep finding way's to mention how adorable Spidey is! I just love that little detail! It makes me laugh every time! I'm very excited for the next update! My scandalist-senses are tingling!
Tamuril2 chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
Ah, this is bad. She got his number. What if a villain gets it? What about the Bugle? This...nope, I'm worried now. Super worried. *fiddles with her Spidey pushdoll (how I wish it were real)*

Awww, that woman totally adopted him, and owned that police officer. How could he just leave him outside in the snow? Poor Spidey. I can just imagine his face lighting up and that adorable "Food?" coming out of his mouth. Gah! So cute!

AHa, the sticky notes. Perfect. :D

Thank you two so much for updating this. Loved it!
Guest of honor chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
I would go and give that woman I peace of my mind! She's just going through people's stuff! Even if it's on the table just leave it and move on! Please update soon cause I want to see all the drama that's going to happen now.
ChevalierRadiant chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
oh my god. you are evil
MandalorianPirate chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
No she can't do that! Great story! :-)
Sunshine-and-Joy chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
Aaaaaah! Cliffhanger!
Love it!

I've always wondered if Spider-man ever used his own merchandise-thank you for answering that question for me :) Really great chapter, thanks for updating.
cabrera1234 chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
what happen did spider-man leave his phone number?
Cashagon chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
Chaos, that's what we have here. That, and hilarity. ;)
MagicWarriorDragon chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
He is weirdly adorable. Or just plain adorable. Now everyone is going to be calling Spider-Man's personal number, lol. Lovely update, as usual, can't wait for more!
OfficialUSMWriter chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
Oh I was loving this so much! I am loving the interactions between police and vigilante so much! Stupid night-time cleaning women has to go and ruin it all!

Oh no, this is going to end disastrous! But I love it anyway! Like, how adorable and cute Spidey acts, how scared he is of most of the police! It's all so perfect!
*shakes head* But then the cleaning women! GRRRRR!

She's gonna sell the number, sell information - oh! VILLAINS ARE GOING TO GET THEIR SLIMEY HANDS ON IT! Spidey is going to get hurt! He's going to take several leaps backwards in his relationship with the police! OH NO! OH NO! CURSE THE RANDOM CLEANING LADY WHO TOOK SPIDEY'S NUMBER! *falls to knees in despair*

*looks up for a moment and whisper* But I love this story so much...
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
Very nice chapter here. Again, you do a great job with your OCs.

Keep the good writing.
LuvFiction Xxxx chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
It's odd but I weirdly enjoy the scenes were the police are mean and cold to spiderman and I absolutely love it when people do kind things for the hero and they begin to accept him. It was so sad when the officer kept him outside like he was a neglected puppy.
The scenes I enjoy more is when spidey is so child like and cute! I can't wait until Jack sees his desk! And to end this review! that ending! Urge! Always with the awesome cliffhangers I don't know if I can take it anymore! I need to read more! I really wish more people wrote stories like this because this is all kinds of amazing and we need more writers like you!
-LFXx
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