Reviews for The Girl in the Tower
BillBrink chapter 35 . 9/7/2015
Wonderful, simply wonderful! Wish you were still writing.
Geri chapter 14 . 11/22/2014
I just wanted to bang my head on my desk when I read this. Snape letting Sara go with a Death Eater, really? That's one strange way to protect someone, even if nothing happened to her (yet)...
AccioFirebolt21065 chapter 17 . 1/20/2013
Uhm it's a little bit hard to read it this way.
AccioFirebolt21065 chapter 14 . 1/20/2013
Uhh isn't Reducto the spell for breaking things? I love your story!
Dragon Nyx Rantiel chapter 4 . 11/9/2012
I have read this story, and number two, so many times that I know it by heart, yet I still come back and read it again. Its a great story, with so much happening its like real life. The problems we all have to face, the decisions we have to make, the ups and downs. I have recommended this story to many of my family and friends, who like Harry Potter. They all loved it. I will recommend this story to anyone who asks if there is a good Harry Potter fanfic.
Draco mudiliar chapter 37 . 12/25/2011
the way Sara was jumping from Harry and Draco, I thought in the end Draco and Harry are going to get together.

But indeed a long good plot
thatpokepornguy chapter 37 . 8/27/2011
This is the most interesting and dramatic story on . It's the best story I have ever read, and I'll end up reading it over and over again. That's all that needs to be said.
weskytron4211 chapter 28 . 6/12/2011
you just made me cry. Enough said.
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
There is unfotuntaly so much NOT explained. How is it that Harry happened to have lost the map and it ended up in Sara's hands? Dumbledor would never have confiscated his map, and those who happened to do so couldn't figure it out and simply gave it back. He lent it to someone, but got it back. So, there is no way that she should have the map. It also doesn't explain why Harry needed to be outside in the rain, or why he would still be dripping by the time he walked the long walk up to the tower.

She's also a Classic Mary Sue, albeit enjoyable to read. She is mondo pretty, has no flaws. Sure, she drinks, but she isn't at all enuberated in this chapter. Which... one also has to ask, how does a minor get ahold of alcohal, particularly since she is from America. Great Britain is slightly less stringent on their laws, but they wouldn't sell to minors. She's a clarvoiant and gets rid of Harry's scar. And no... her sad past isn't a flaw either.
Vault Boy chapter 14 . 9/3/2010
Argh. I was enjoying the story - love your writing - and the character of Sara up until she started getting involved with Lucius and Draco. Seriously detracts from any liking I had towards her, and makes it a bit difficult to read on. She has the loyalty of Wormtail...

Nevertheless, I will attempt to read on. I can only hope this is resolved sooner rather than later in the story.
Scheming Christina chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
I love this story. This is actually the first piece of fan fiction I ever read, and that was in 2004/2005!

Now re-reading with fond memories.

x
venusmelody chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
I've only read the first chapter, and I think your writing is STUNNING, but I feel that your introduction of Sara (this is speaking for just chapter one) could have gone better. That she's in Harry's debt for his parents helping hers is the main savior, but otherwise, so far, she's... unremarkable, that is, she fades away in a sea of other characters in her introduction. See, the first things that we learn about her are that she has a tragic past, that she is gorgeous, and that she has Powers; and later, that she and Harry get on very well and he's humbled in her presence. You are an extremely talented writer (Sara's pain is beautifully rendered), but at this point you haven't separated her enough from the Sues that do crop up sometimes. While I have no doubt that you do so later, and this would be fine in fiction, this is fanfiction, and (in my opinion at least) fast HPxOC stories just sort of fade away.

On the other hand, I love the atmosphere you've cultivated. It's absolutely beautiful, and I'll be looking forward to what happens next.
wizmage chapter 36 . 3/10/2010
This is nice. I'm glad i was able to read this.
Jimbocous chapter 37 . 2/10/2010
Interesting and nicely done story. The only thing I ended up confused about was that, in three different chapters, I believe you described Sara's eyes as blue, brown and violet? Anyway, thanks for a great read
Jimbocous chapter 17 . 2/9/2010
Just a heads-up on this chapter. A few paragraphs in, something happened to the formatting, adding a line break character after each character of each word, resulting in one column per line of text. I pasted it into Word and removed the extraneous format characters, and the chapter otherwise seems intact. If you're still about, thought you might want to know and perhaps reload the chapter. If you don't have the original and need help with a quick fix, please feel free to drop me an email.
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