Reviews for Mafioso |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hell, yeah - I'm totally up for making this a two-shot! This was absolutely brilliant! |
![]() ![]() Oh goodness! Your Tomione stories are becoming my favorite stories to read. I loved this story, and can't wait to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very hot story! I really enjoyed the non-magical side of it. The pacing was just right. The characterizations were wonderful. Loved every word! I would definitely be interested in more if you were willing to expand it. Definitely will follow this one just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't usually read alternate universe but this sounded so good and boy as I glad I did ! Seriously this was so good that I got to the end expecting to click next chapter! Only to remember its a one shot ! D: I would definitely read more of this if you wrote more, so so so good ! Love it intensely ! |
![]() ![]() You're definitely one of my favourite Tomione authors, so excited whenever I see that you've written more! There's a really good balance between plot and sexytimes in your fics and the characterisations are fabulous as well, keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() FANTASTIC! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ayyyyyyeeeeee so hot! This was really well written. It doesn't just jump into the smut, the build up was nice. I like the idea that even though Tom is so intense and focused and serious, Hermione makes him reckless. I always love reading different ways, different dynamics that could make their relationship work. A second chapter would be most welcomed! Thanks for sharing! You're wonderful :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. Truly enjoyed your portrayal of both Tom and Hermione, as well as their interactions with one another. It was edgy, gritty, and the smut was fantastic. Nothing wrong with a little bang bang, especially when you set this up so beautifully. I really loved the universe you created for this, and would definitely be interested in this becoming a two-shot, just to see where this leads :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would definitely read another chapter of you made this into a two-shot. I enjoyed it so much. Loved your description of Tom, as I thought it seemed very true to character. Even if you don't decide to expand this into a two shot, I think it stands really well on its own. Great work! |
![]() ![]() I think it would look great as a multi chapter fic. You are very talented. Please keep on writing more tomione and prolong this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story. I loved that it was a modern AU, and I think you did an amazing job of converting this story into if they were muggles. The smut scene was amazing written and so good to read! I enjoyed the way you ended the story, dark but happy. And I would defintely read more if you made it a two-shot. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd reaaaaaally love it if it was a two shot, me be three shot *twinkle eyes* you write he best gangster/mafia sort of Tom. My favourite kind:) you're totally not trash you're more like diamonds in the sky hahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! It's great as a one-shot but also has great potential to be longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing. Seriously I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |