Reviews for Challenger |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story has consistently made Pokemon-both the creatures themselves, their powers and their effects on society more mature, developed and profound, both in the physical destruction Pokemon powers can cause, the effects of battling, the lifecycles and growth of Pokemon and how the society that exists in this story has adapted to cope with this new reality! There are darker, more mature themes in this story without losing sight of what made the canon Pokemon so popular and successful-the exploration of strange new places and the bonds close friends create with one another! The human characters are more developed as well, with more strengths and weaknesses and depth than the canon. I look forwards to learning more about this world in the coming year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its getting old reading these battles that are so close |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a quick point, Jasmine isn't in a safari ball, you said they transferred her to a regular pokeball so they could recycle and reuse the safari balls |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am Indonesian and i realized that "sobek" is Indonesian "sobek" means tear or rip |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeevee is def right, ash needs to train too! She's so adorable... I wonder what she'll evolve into a fairy type perhaps? Maybe a psychic, ash really does need both those types on his team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sucks that pikachu got hurt but at least he's not down for the count. And honestly ash needed a reality shock, he and his pokemon aren't anywhere near powerful enough for this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, in this story giovanni is ash's father, I suppose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ash staring off with charmander is interesting. Leaf seems arrogant and is a bit of a turn off. Hope ash is able to find some more interesting and powerful pokemon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the chapter. like the updated versions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished rereading the story again since it seems your back and this was great i love your pacing and hope we get a new chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reread the whole story since the update and it’s still as awesome as it was back then ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finished re read. Sad no more new chapter yet, but hopefully will be updated soon. |