Reviews for Challenger
Kennji chapter 12 . 1/16
right I was rereading this story and I have to ask when the new (updatedchapters will be coming as May 9th 21 was chapter 12 at first i was confused about ch 13 and than remembered that it could not have been the new chapter yet so could you post a status off the update in the story description or your profile so I and other fans could check how far along it is
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 18 . 1/11
hmmm. still no grass type? possible eeveelutuon?
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 16 . 1/10
I swear Pyro knows dragon claw already. from a tm
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 15 . 1/10
one thing I've noticed. is that when he caught jasmine in the safari you wrote they transfered her to a normal ball. but the past couple times you've referred to her ball as a safari ball. just thought I'd toss that out there. easy fix if you get rid of the transfer part
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 10 . 1/10
SIIIIICCCCKKKKK!
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 7 . 1/10
noooooo scyther noooo
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 8 . 1/10
ohhhhh maaaaannnn! cmon scyther or dratini! CMON!
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 7 . 1/9
this story is great so far. I'm still salty he didn't get a ghastly, but oh well can't win em all :p finally clicked who this guy is. I think. pokemon collesium right? awesome game
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 6 . 1/9
damn... was hoping for gengar
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 5 . 1/9
omg gengar pleeeaaaasssseee lol
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 4 . 1/9
awww sick luxury ball. excited to see what tou evolve it into. it has shadowball so it's already got a sick move
hmmm
Walkmanapprenticewordsmith chapter 1 . 1/9
oh... my..
. God! Dragon dance and Dragon Rush?! OMG LETS FUCKING GOOOOOO
Gredon1979 chapter 29 . 1/6
Story's getting good nice character development
The Durdens Wrath chapter 12 . 1/6
I love that THIS Charizard loves his trainer
Guest chapter 12 . 12/31/2021
What man how long till the next update. You can't leave us hanging after such an awesome chapter of gyradose
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