Reviews for Challenger
Werewingwolfxx chapter 2 . 2/23/2016
can pyro learn solar beam or focus bladt once it becomes a charizard?
espeon44 chapter 2 . 2/23/2016
will ash face gary
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Hmm, i'm gonna stick around and see how things develop from here. While i'm not the biggest fan of convenient egg moves, i don't have anything to complain about really. Nicknames outside of games always felt kinda silly to me for some reason, but if author goes out of his/her way to develop the Pokemon into actual characters, it's all cool. otherwise they just come out as cool pets more than anything else. Can't explain that one properly to be honest, but that's just how my brain works.

See you in the next chapter.
LioPyro7890 chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
Like the prologue can't wait for more :)
xXSakuraBlossomsXx chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
very good beginning! well developed characters and the story is not rushed, good job. please update soon!
espeon44 chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
can ash get a eevee
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