Reviews for Challenger |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeevee is def right, ash needs to train too! She's so adorable... I wonder what she'll evolve into a fairy type perhaps? Maybe a psychic, ash really does need both those types on his team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sucks that pikachu got hurt but at least he's not down for the count. And honestly ash needed a reality shock, he and his pokemon aren't anywhere near powerful enough for this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, in this story giovanni is ash's father, I suppose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ash staring off with charmander is interesting. Leaf seems arrogant and is a bit of a turn off. Hope ash is able to find some more interesting and powerful pokemon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the chapter. like the updated versions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished rereading the story again since it seems your back and this was great i love your pacing and hope we get a new chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reread the whole story since the update and it’s still as awesome as it was back then ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finished re read. Sad no more new chapter yet, but hopefully will be updated soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing to see jasmine evolving, nice job on the whole proces and this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best fanfic I have ever read. Can you send me the discord link please. |
![]() ![]() Its been a long time since we got a new chapter from this. At long last Jasmine evolved, we missed out on it in the previous version, glad we finally got it here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see this continuing! Excited for more. |