|Reviews for Hot Fuss|
| FanofFanFiction chapter 4 . 9/25/2017
Great story so far!
| daswhoiam chapter 14 . 7/16/2017
This is a nice read. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
| PulchritudinousPain chapter 14 . 8/10/2016
I liked the premise of your story and your characterisation of Hermione but thought perhaps Malfoy's evil scheme wasn't really evil enough. He was too kind and not really self serving as he was saving all the people/creatures that worked for him too which made me like him from the start. It was a really sweet read. Keep on writing - I can tell you're constantly improving.
| elizabeth.patrick.7792 chapter 14 . 6/21/2016
I really enjoyed this story!
| Scherherazade chapter 14 . 5/2/2016
Nice romance. I enjoyed reading it very much.
| Gia1802 chapter 14 . 4/11/2016
FINALLY. The kiss you long enough!
| Drusilla Maxima chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
Ok, first things first. This was a cute sorry and generally well-written, but there are a few aspects that I suspect turned off potential readers.
- Spelling: You had a lot of mistakes that wouldn't be caught by spell check (i.e. "desert" for dessert, "steal" for steel, and "que" for cue). They're distracting.
- The "Killers" theme: It has nothing to do with the story and is going to turn off people who aren't fans of the band.
- The lengthy, soliloquy-like dialogue: The characters often make emotional declarations for a whole paragraph, and it's really unnatural.
You have a lot of raw talent. You just need to find a good beta to hone it.
| its zabini not zambini chapter 14 . 4/10/2016
What a great ending! It was a lovely story. There were a few errors throughout but nothing that can't be overlooked! Thank you for an enjoyable read :)
| its zabini not zambini chapter 13 . 4/10/2016
Is the key to all the proceeds for S.P.E.W? I'm hoping so anyway. I'm glad Ron isn't in this story, I have never liked him in fanfics for some reason.
| its zabini not zambini chapter 12 . 4/10/2016
I wonder why if that's how Harry feels about Ginny he hasn't made a move to progress in their relationship...I hope we find that out!
| its zabini not zambini chapter 10 . 4/10/2016
Ginny is a good friend for being there for Hermione even though they aren't on the best terms. I hope Hermione returns the favour and listens to Ginny
| its zabini not zambini chapter 9 . 4/10/2016
That was so sweet that all the proceeds were to go to Hermiones cause! And they finally kissed! Such a pity the chapter ended on a sad note for Hermione and Draco.
| its zabini not zambini chapter 8 . 4/10/2016
The dress and bracelet sound beautiful!
| its zabini not zambini chapter 7 . 4/10/2016
Paparazzi ruining the moment! Can't wait to see what Harry's reaction to that headline will be!
| its zabini not zambini chapter 4 . 4/10/2016
Wow way harsh of Hermione! The comment about Harry was out of line! Don't blame Ginny for kicking her out. Great chapter!