|Reviews for Just (Girl)Friends Who Haven't Met|
| Madness is a State of Mind chapter 1 . 10/17
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
Um... did they... you know...kissed...lip on lip thing like kiss?...cause... why would they...do that?
| Bluejay36 chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Ho ho! So star and maple
| Imnotaguestanymore chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Huh, this was interesting! I liked it! Great job with it, honestly, I kinda wished it wasn't completed a d you were continuing their ship, because you wrote it perfectly!
| naru foxxx chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
while do feel that the story it self for the most part is fairly well written, I can't help but feel that the romance between star and Mable came off as a bit forced.
this is due to there being absolutely no mention of it until the very end, this could have alleviated by sprinkling in some little moments throughout the story.
for example When Star and mable are searching through Stars spellbook you could have had their hands accidently touch as they both go to turn the page at the exact same time and when their hands touch they both blush.
just little moments like that would have greatly improved the story as it stands now the romance in the story boils down to and then they kissed the end.