|Reviews for In Love and War|
| missmaygranger chapter 40 . 6/17
I’ve been following this story for years and I only today realised you had updated recently! I LOVED the last chapter, it made me laugh and cry, and I can only thank you for this story. Lots of love xxxxx
| LiGi chapter 40 . 6/1
Ahhh, another fantastic story! I really loved this one too, it is so good.
It fits together really well with the Harry/Ginny one, the balance of scenes that are the same as that one but with a different point of view and scenes that pick up where the other stopped, and then entirely new scenes... Brilliant!
I loved the Hermione and her parents storyline, you created such a believable mix of them being so happy to all be together again and them all slightly mistrusting each other and being awkward because of the time apart. It must be so difficult for the Grangers because they just aren't involved in such a huge part of their daughter's life and will never be able to understand it all. You wrote their relationship perfectly I think.
The Percy bits were great too, it is so nice to see him trying so hard to be part of his family again, I loved it all. You really do write all of the Weasleys so excellently!
And I liked how differently you wrote Ron and Hermione's relationship from Harry and Ginny's, their whole dynamic was different which made it very believable as two seperate couples with real personalities!
You are super amazing! I love your writing! Favourite!
| andthisisabitofboth chapter 40 . 5/23
Ugh, my poor heart! I laughed, squealed, kicked and rolled around while reading this. So, so lovely; you are a fantastic writer. I'm now off to read more of your work! Thank you!
| Guest chapter 40 . 5/15
cute ending :)
| Ju Melo chapter 40 . 5/12
Oh my God, I’m crying so hard! I couldn’t picture a better ending to this story. It’s just perfectly perfect! You’re an amazing writer, and I hope you keep writing for us for many long years ️
Have you already started writing about the girls’ last year? I’m really looking forward to it!
| prewettpotter chapter 40 . 4/26
Brilliant ending to an unbelievably wonderful story! You are such a talented writer.
Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous story with us. I cannot wait for the next one!
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/20
"Serves you right."
SO WELL DONE MY DARLING, CONGRATULATIONS! I'M SO PROUD!
| HeRonLove chapter 40 . 4/22
That was a wonderful chapter.
| MelRosk chapter 40 . 4/22
Ahh, I cannot believe it is over! I have been with this story for 2 years and it was such a fantastic ride. I tend to prefer Harry centric stories, so this was a little different for me, but I loved it! I loved the trio relationship, and the family drama. I LOVE how you weave in plot lines from your other fics. I think I prefer FSWC a bit more because it was more my thing, but I felt that the two together were magnificent. I did miss 2 things—I think I remember a little pregnancy scare right after Australia, which was never win this story. I am also super bummed we didn’t get to see the letter from Harry to Hermione, or her full response. PLEASE at an outtake or a one shot where we can see Hermione’s response to the letter! I also need some recommendations for new stories to read (nursing a baby at night and I need things to keep me occupied!) and would love to see more from you or hear about some of your favorites to read/follow.
| riversgirl75 chapter 40 . 4/22
Wow. That’s the perfect ending! You made it gorgeous and romantic and sexy and everything. I have read both pieces, and they dovetail perfectly! In truth, Ron and Hermione have never been my faivirite pair, but your characterization of how they grew and matured together is completely convincing that they could in fact work. Beautiful story! Bravo!
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/19
Both this and Faintest are great stories, but there are two things I find annoying. Namely, that you left out the meeting with Robards in both stories and that you didn’t give us the scene of Harry giving Hermione her birthday present from her perspective. I don’t know about anyone else but I wanted to know what Harry said. But other than that great stuff.
| MandyinKC chapter 40 . 4/20
"Just don't do that stupid girl thing..." Ah, there's the Ron I want to kick in the shin ;)
One of the things I like about Ron and Hermione's love scens (especially compared to Harry and Ginny's) is that they are so much more evolved. The way the interact and even the language you use definitely shows they are more experienced. Oh, and this was super romantic!
I laughed when Hermione was imagining Ron's letters and they included, "Harry is moping without Ginny." Poor, emo Harry. But I also like that you included her worry about her parents demanding all of her time. I think it's realistic that Hermione would still worry about that relationship and maybe resent some of its demands. I also like how you listed out all Hermione's worries and made her stop herself from getting wound up. That was very relatable. "Again?"/"Yes, please." *snort* That seemed a bit risky. Shouldn't Harry be on his way back any moment?
OK, Ginny totally stole the last scene. But I do love that you ended with the image of the two boys standing on the Platform talking about tomorrow.
I know you struggled with this story, but it came out really well. You hit all the big Romione moments. Take a break for awhile, but not I'm looking forward to the third installment.
| billdog718 chapter 1 . 4/19
Great story as always!, is this it or are you writing a trilogy?
| LilyJean630 chapter 40 . 4/19
Wonderful! I hope you continue to write more stories! Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/18
Super good advice, Mr. Weasley!