|Reviews for A Dragon's New Path|
| Cboylan chapter 17 . 7/16
RIP.. story said it updated so I just reread it but nope. still a masterpiece though!
| Persona of the People chapter 17 . 7/1
Whew...shit, that was a long ass read...cool stuff. I specifically read all the way through just so I could leave this one comment...interesting.
You have quite the imagination and story here. I like that you went with Ophis already having the grown up woman body...I like that one best.
Also, seeing as you don't mess with Loli characters...would you be down for Yasaka? The adult nine tailed yokai that has a physics-defying kimono like Kuroka...it'd be nice.
And would you please put another list for the harem and peerage, it's been a long while, and I don't know about others, but I forgot who is all to be in both...
Nice also for you making Issei a mid-class now. Maybe people will stop digging on him for just being a low-class...since he's not.
I also like that you have made him more dominant and less 'I take everyone's shit and still were friends somehow'.
Lastly, you surprise me, since most people who write a lot either can't spell too well and never correct it, or they are good but they write super short things and they irritate either way...
You have met a happy medium with decent writing and bigger lengths. Well done sir...or madam...it's 2018 so I can't really judge...
Have a good day sir and keep up the good work...
| raycharles1 chapter 4 . 6/27
Ooo someone gonna kiss the donkey
| roadkill47 chapter 14 . 6/26
Over all you have written an excellent bit of fanfiction. The negative is the non-canon characters Esdeath and Saeko. Highschool Dxd frankly already has too many female love interests as is, only to Love-Ru is worse. Adding these characters and moving the focus of the romance to them greatly detracts from your story telling.
That is all, good luck and keep on writing!
| Cboylan chapter 17 . 6/14
I'm happy that you are still making these stories but I'm extremely pissed I have nothing else to read. this story literally captures my full attention and i will give you the praise you have earned my friend.
| ionut.cosmin12 chapter 12 . 6/9
well loved the story at begin, after i can say only 1 word FORCED, your entire story gets boring after that i do not feel nothing for the new characters ,you make them op some times just so after a couple words they are weak as fuck and somthing always happens so they cant take place in that fight etc,sadly loved the story,but you forced the plot and caracters so much that it took me 1 hour to digest some chapters
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/9
ok i know this is your fanfiction but the fights realy disapont again (dont get me wrong the fights are nice but the way you do you do it makes somting inside my head say, fake fake) every fight when issei should have advantage he lets his guard down just so he barley win against a weaker enemy ,and that always reminds me he was able to injure a ultimate level demon kuroneko sister ,but gets his wind down from sanji ,i do understand that, you even gived reasons as leting his guard down and the rules of the game wich he cant use flash moves but leting his guard down exactly after saying hel use full power with such conviction... Main reason i complain is that i always image kuroka vs sanji (as sanji got quite the hits on issei) and always see kuroka using 1 finger to defeat sanji and if you compare that with issei fight with her it does not match ,maybe you do this to create some plot later but still..., not bad but somting seemed forced and i realy loved your work i also plan to try your other story so i hope this is not overused(btw its about 2:25 when wringing this so get me easy)
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/9
ok love the story but have to say i am realy disaponted with the fight ,hate this kind of fights when kuroka was deemed ultimate devil and somehow you made a realy long fight with issei wich at the moment even in you story should not be able to resist that much ,and the fact you made rias a ussles here, i do understand that you did for plot but still annyoing.
Also another big problem is issei punching her in face and her coughing blood instanly thats imposible at most it would be from her wouned face but not ,,coughing,, as for coughing blood in fights thats from internal organs injuryes mostly,if that would be from head it would be brain matter and preaty much killing
ALL IN ALL a realy nice story and hope you keep this up
| TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 16 . 6/8
will Ise be rebirthed ? I hope so, because Ise for me is to boring and weak right now. But good Story with potential.
| marquis.shax chapter 17 . 6/7
hmm for some reason that seems familiar like I should know what it is (as I know it's not time for Trihexa yet plus you wouldn't make that thing a small female around 13 lol). Ugh damn it this is gonna drive me insane trying to remember who or what the hell this is lol
| marquis.shax chapter 16 . 6/7
ugh I really hate when people mess up Mihawks name it's DRACULE not Dracula I don't know why so many people mess that up.
| marquis.shax chapter 13 . 6/6
the Gremory family is actually ranked as a Duke not an Arch Duke (not sure which is higher though honestly lol. The Gremory is related to the Highest ranking among the pillars as Rias' mother is a Bael which is ranked as King. Sona is the Second highest rated as Sitri is ranked as a Prince
| marquis.shax chapter 10 . 6/6
honestly the way Issei is going with getting into these life or death fights is easily the best way to power up. Training is great to learn new stuff and all but the experience gained from real battle helps you learn faster since if you don't grow and adapt against a stronger fighter in the world Issei belongs to you die lol
| marquis.shax chapter 3 . 6/6
Chiba Erika would be a good addition to the harem or to take the place of someone like Serafall since she's sealed. I'd also suggest eventually adding Grayfia towards the end due to all but I believe Ajuka sealing themselves with Trihexa
| Struggler-Sama Nerazim chapter 17 . 6/6
ignore the people who bash you for "Rias Bashing" first of all it's fan fiction and second it's not your story