Reviews for Are You Afraid of the Dark? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story so far |
![]() ![]() You wonder how much Jack Slash was worth then Danny and Anne-Rose brought him to justice. And how much Coil will be worth when brought to Piggot's feet. As The Dark will claim the bounty on Coil (and the free loot at Coil's place to settle "defamation of character" grievances). Though I'm willing to guess Coil will be unmasked, then shot by Danny to show "NOBODY pulls the scam this sucker did and will not answer to me for it. For I am The Dark, and I can be Your Doom." |
![]() ![]() How you much you want to wager that the "bone" Danny wants to pick with Coil is also attached to Coil himself, and how much more likely would it be that Danny might sweep Coil's hideout for whatever loot he could get in a single go? Coil tried to frame him for a few crimes he hadn't done, and so Danny might want some "out of court settlements" for "defamation of character." No doubt if there was loose cash, The Dark would crack the safes with the help of Death's Head, then Taylor and Danny could loot them (with Taylor asking for allowance money when they were free and clear). |
![]() ![]() And the hunt begins. The Dark saw the proof Coil wronged him solid and irrefutable. How much longer can you run, because The Dark will bring the Fear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh, that was smooth! Taylor is awesome backup for her Dad! *vbg* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story. Wow. First chapter was really dark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, it looks like Taylor has had some excellent brainstorming sessions with Danny and figured out things she learned much later in canon within days of Triggering. I'm assuming she Triggered on January 3rd. I really liked how they faked out Oni Lee, he was too busy going WTF to teleport away. I look forward to seeing what they do to Lung and Coil. Thank you very much for the satisfying and entertaining update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying how Danny and Taylor and Chewie are able to lean and learn from each other Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is finally back for a chapter! Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, and also a fitting end to Oni Lee. Realisticly it would only have been a question of time before someone got the drop on him, as his MO was well known and he wasn't bullet proof. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Coil, it wasn't a pleasure, you reap what you sow and that's exactly what's going to happen to you. Although before that we see Emily address a few words to her people after the success of the mission against E88, announcing their next step against the rest of the gangs, as well as the service for Sophia (another person who suffered the karma of her actions, what Coil is going to experience) Also see Coil and Lung respectively, plan the occupation of the former E88 territory, being precisely there where The Dark expresses his opinion about having his brand pirated, making an example of the impostor who worked for Coil and Oni Lee (whom Danny It is handled without problems too, with the help of Taylor and her insects), and making the rest of the survivors on both sides run (and I wabt to see Coil and Lung's reaction, well I guess we will see about Coil soon) That and seeing how two members of the PRT correctly deduce what happened to one of the infamous normal members of the E88, the one who killed Fleur (which Sarah tries to inform her brother Mike, for which she asks him to go baci to BB, to show him the evidence of The Dark tying up that loose end from New Wave's past) So, the way I see it, incidentally, Danny will end the gang war in BB, let's see how the rest of the crazy (S9, Butcher, Fallen) and the Power To Be (that is, Cauldron) react to the return of someone so notorious and infamous Good luck and keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very swag |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did she just make a damn aburame clone?! That's awesome! Also, I always get giddy when these chapters release. They are just a genuinely fun mix of powers meeting John Wick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter as usual. I hope you update it soon. Thank you for providing your time to create entertainment to all your readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent job, and keep up the excellent work. |