Reviews for Yet Another 'Ranma as an Orochi Decendant' Fic'
SnappingFlower chapter 4 . 8/10/2018

The disease of the world is abundant,
Deadly corruption overwhelming.
Never take stock in the things below,
for they are but temporary.
Rather look up at the things above,
for they are eternal.

Mr. Haziq chapter 25 . 5/10/2017
Drunk Nabiki is hilarious!
BrazeRancor chapter 25 . 12/31/2012
Now this. I like this.
Demons Of Doom chapter 10 . 2/18/2012
Dude, poor Shampoo D:
Hammerchuckery chapter 25 . 3/21/2011
"I think I peed a little…" is the last thing we read, then a hiatus period. Lovely.
Hammerchuckery chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
No! How can this end in 2009!
Orchamus chapter 25 . 1/30/2011
...the hell? Nabiki is messed up lol.
Orchamus chapter 11 . 1/30/2011
The overkill in this is so good*sniff sniff teardrop*
Peter Kim chapter 24 . 6/5/2010
It would have been better if Ryuji has gotten his wife and Genma's wife to beat the hell out of Genma for not teaching those techniques.
firemaster101 chapter 25 . 5/2/2010
hahahahahahaha i peeped alittle
firemaster101 chapter 15 . 5/2/2010
i love family reunions
firemaster101 chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
sweet i like this ranma
keep up the good work
firemaster101 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
nodoka is crazy
take rsponibility
Mat49324 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
You get this because that son of a bithc moterfoker Lawra flamed a me and called me a terrible writer! But you deserve it becuase you are terrible writer!

It is horrible. You're a loser with a lame life for writing this. your chapters are too long and too boring. Read and review my story "The get togethers?" so you can see what a real writer can do. If you're smart enough and can find my story that is BITCH.










Tell that bastard Lawra to stop Flaming a me or I'll flame all peoples related to her in even the smallerest ways!

And you can't report a me! Anon flames are Safe and I will tell I didn't do it Bitch and my friendx Angel Wings-008 Will proterct me and believe what I say!
Ganheim chapter 4 . 6/3/2009
A nice, violent woman who hated the world for what it did to her life, and felt the obligation to take it out on everyone.

[The kind of person who would kill everybody around her…]


[Interrogative missing its question mark]



Chapter 2

dicipline to develope

[discipline, develop]

since they had least to fear from their employer

[Yeah…just death]

before he started to pretend to be a hood ornament

[What ‘pretend’?]

the stratusphere.


Chapter 3

against it, as

[Superfluous comma]

by it's weight.


from beneith.


The pigtailed girl turned to stare at the black and white, winged, humanoid rhino with cat whiskers, tusks,

[Well, at least you gave him an original curse rather than making him a panda]

exeedingly violent


She lunged at the other girl with a straight fist, only to have it dodged just slightly with the tilt of her head. The raven-haired girl followed up with a crescent kick to the head, which was forcefully backhanded away, causing Akane to lose balance.

[This seems familiar…]

in excusiatingly bizarre


unortodox situations


unconcious Akane's


Chapter 4

I know you much be hungry

[Need I say more?]

into her harms,and


A pudgy man in a Maoist uniform greeted.

[Where’d he come from? You don’t clearly transition into a flashback]

slowly deepend


while occationally


for her, as a

[Unnecessary comma]

named king

[Yet not capitalized like a name]

‘Yet another’ definitely seems an appropriate title, as this fic doesn’t add much to the community.
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