I guess this writer had her reasons for dedicating 3 pages to the bitch Esme. Esme spoiled her daughter from a young age and ended up with the manipulative bitch. I have no sympathy for Esme in this story but she's pissed me off as this so-called ending is about dealing with her drama.

This story is one of the best on this site m I've read it multiple times so far. Hope you write a sequel if possible.
I think Edward was too lenient on the Woods after the manipulated photographs and then calling Bella a slut. He should have sold their house and broken ties with them. 1 year is too less.
And maybe Mrs Cope will eventually know her place, an employee.

Re-reading this story. Mrs Cope was already getting out of order from the onset of meeting Bella with regards to the comment of redecorating and it being Bella's home too.

The traditional Russian wedding drama could have been summarised instead of wasting our time. The last 3 pages dealt with the Cullens drama which was unnecessary as both Alice and Carlisle deserved their deaths. Esme and her fucking drama was unnecessary too as she was too easy on and ignorant of her daughter's behaviours.
You ended this story with Esme's drama at the cartel meeting but if you look at it it reads as incomplete. There should have been a couple more chapters of Edward, Bella Lizzie as a family.

Not 'poor Esme'. She was clueless about her daughter's behaviours because she allowed her to grow up in such a manner. I have no sympathy for Esme.

Esme was full of shit in this story and she spoilt Alice who grew the way she did. Just unfortunate that this story ended with her drama

I've never liked Alice. Majority of the FF writers write her as an annoying interfering bitch who is obsessed with shopping, partying, dressing Bella as Barbie and manipulating all her family members.

One of the best FF stories of Edward and Bella. BUT, you ended this too soon

Edward should sell the house the Woods are staying in.

Writer, you fixed that chink in your armour. This chapter was really good

Bella is a fool to believe him even if he ain't doing nothing wrong

Edward should have limited the Woods meeting with Elizabeth to every quarter, they didn't deserve more than that

Mrs Cope had a big fucking mouth embarrassing Bella

I hate Jacob Black too

Loving your story so far and this chapter was even better when Edward gave Elizabeth the platform and strength to stand up for her beliefs and her father