Reviews for Evanescent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha even better than before i think u should give naruto a clans of animal that can use current as the main weapon and gave naruto storm release a pure one exactly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well nice restart going to interesting to see how things turn out this time around anyways keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed BSBL and am looking forward to how this remake plays out XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter, Please keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well so far so good, wondering what other changes your going to do with story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would Naruto be able to turn into lightning like Garra can turn into sand? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This starting chapter was much better than the original. I especially liked that there wasn't some magical lightning button he pressed like in the original. I have to ask though is this still going to be hanabi pairing? I mean there really wasn't much to even suggest said pairing in th original aside from what was in the story description. And yes i do like that kyuubi wasn't such a generic ass thisgo around |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter can't wait to read the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must confess to having mixed feelings about this re-write. On the one hand, it's good. I can tell from the chapter that you posted that you're intent on a much more well-written story. But on the other hand, I had really liked the old version, despite how dark it was. Still, I will look forward to future chapters and enjoying your renewed story. I have to ask though, how much of the original story are you keeping in and how much are you tossing? You had some very interesting ideas in your original thay would be a shame to see go by the wayside. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, I wasn't at first aware that you were redoing Boy Struck By Lightning. So I thought...hmmm. Maybe we'll get an Infamous!Naruto! or maybe even a !Naruto! so I got pretty excited. Ah well, maybe someone else will write one :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked your origonal story so this is decent, I didn't like the part in the origonal story where naruto got kidnapped by Root for "Conditioning" after the council attack and you re-wrote it... Please remember if you're to re-write somethng then adjust the following chapter accordingly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll read it when there are as many chapters as the original. Nothing personal but the ending thing doesn't give me hope to see this story finished or expanded. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You changed the ratios. Also, i look forward to where this goes, as a fan of the original. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you will make the peering naruto x hanabi. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dam humans moron of the highest level |