Reviews for Evanescent
HitmaN007 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
haha even better than before i think u should give naruto a clans of animal that can use current as the main weapon and gave naruto storm release a pure one exactly
SPark681 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Well nice restart going to interesting to see how things turn out this time around anyways keep up the great work!
Pokezeb chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I enjoyed BSBL and am looking forward to how this remake plays out XD
desdelor97 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the great work.
TubfullOfDishes345 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Well so far so good, wondering what other changes your going to do with story.
M.D. Hurricane chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Would Naruto be able to turn into lightning like Garra can turn into sand?
PugTheMagician chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
This starting chapter was much better than the original. I especially liked that there wasn't some magical lightning button he pressed like in the original. I have to ask though is this still going to be hanabi pairing? I mean there really wasn't much to even suggest said pairing in th original aside from what was in the story description. And yes i do like that kyuubi wasn't such a generic ass thisgo around
ivan0061509 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Nice chapter can't wait to read the next chapter
LordTicky chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I must confess to having mixed feelings about this re-write. On the one hand, it's good. I can tell from the chapter that you posted that you're intent on a much more well-written story. But on the other hand, I had really liked the old version, despite how dark it was. Still, I will look forward to future chapters and enjoying your renewed story. I have to ask though, how much of the original story are you keeping in and how much are you tossing? You had some very interesting ideas in your original thay would be a shame to see go by the wayside.
RexNihil chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Hmm, I wasn't at first aware that you were redoing Boy Struck By Lightning. So I thought...hmmm. Maybe we'll get an Infamous!Naruto! or maybe even a !Naruto! so I got pretty excited. Ah well, maybe someone else will write one :D
ThatCrazyBrit94 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I liked your origonal story so this is decent, I didn't like the part in the origonal story where naruto got kidnapped by Root for "Conditioning" after the council attack and you re-wrote it...

Please remember if you're to re-write somethng then adjust the following chapter accordingly.
ThePhenoix11 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I'll read it when there are as many chapters as the original. Nothing personal but the ending thing doesn't give me hope to see this story finished or expanded.
kitsuneswiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
You changed the ratios. Also, i look forward to where this goes, as a fan of the original.
Banpaia Hime chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Hope you will make the peering naruto x hanabi. Thanks
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Dam humans moron of the highest level
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