Reviews for Evanescent
ExecutionerKain chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Nice start!
arc89 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
salut j'ai hate de redecouvrir l'histoire et je me demandait si tu gardait Naruto X Hanabi car j'adore se couple est je ne trouve pas beaucoup de fic avec sur ceux

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AC130INBOUND chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I only have one question, is the pairing still going to be Naruto and Hanabi? I really like the dynamic between the two of them and unfortunately very few stories involve the pairing.
Ziltoid chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Seems I was just in time to read the old version. I wonder where you'll take this rewrite. Some typo's, btw: 'father and sony' (in the middle) and 'the He kneeled' bit at the end. Otherwise a fine chapter. Hopefully Hiruzen won't go all-out in ooc rage mode. At least, not so often.

Also, if you're not going to rehash the same plot, not exactly at least, then why not keep the old story online for those who wish to read it?
Dekky chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Hey that was great I loved this whole chapter.
DangerousQuokka chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I am so damn excited for this!
I'm happy, yet kind sad that this will only follow some of the previous story's plot. Will he still have a summoning contract? I'm hoping he'll still have the same one as before.

Really enjoyed the chapter! Till next time.
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