Awesome chapter! I enjoyed this!

Unfortunately am little disappointed my character in this chapter. I was more expecting my character becoming one of those interesting sideline characters that would show up once and while, not just get killed off like that.

While you did capture his character fairly right, I was just expecting bit more. His interactions with Angel was interesting though it's safe see Angel isn't best necessary best example for Mandalorian, depending which you mean as she fits more closer to Boba Fett or Shae Vizla.

Though I do think she's misunderstanding about honor. She's seeing it though way of fighting, not way of action. I have no doubts she'll have no problems shooting people in back, I doubt she'll kill civilians or stuff like that. Like j said, depends on which honor you mean.

My fault though, should have given more details and realized things were not what I could have liked be. It's unfortunately making me rethink on giving OCs out to authors as I realize it's starting become bad idea.

Still I thank you for using him, sorry this is off putting but just becoming depressed on several matters. An overall nice chapter.

Good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

WHOA. I had no idea the TheSib was reading this! Full points to you, Arctic Swordsman! I think this just goes to show how much you've grown as a writer in the time that you've spent on this project. Well done!

Awesome chapter! Loved seeing Helios and Ren in action! Hopefully we'll get to see the rest of Wyvern's Inferno during the jailbreak next chapter.

Thx for the shout out btw :)

Extremely well written, and I must say: I was captivated by the fight scenes! (Even reread them a couple times.) I particularly like the way Xero was written, and I kinda want to see a little more of him. Keep up the good work!

Awesome chapter! Loved the battle between my OC and Angel! What else do you have planned for Xero in the future?

I digress though. This was a seriously sweet chapter. The battles and egos clashing were so detailed! See ya next update!

Awesome fight scenes! Looking forward to next chapter.

Awesome chapter! My gosh! This is so AWESOME! Please update again soon!

Caught a few references here and there! Nice work!

By golly! THIS WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER!

Dibs! I dibs killing Sugou again!

'Ion's inner Star Wars fanboy'. I laughed at that. XD

Hmm interesting, am curious how will my OC will fit in within the story? Am overall interested to see what will happen in the story.

By looks of things, lots of players will be showing up soon. Good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

Good start! This is shaping up to be a good fic so far!

Hehehehehehehehehehehehe... I am very pleased with the direction that this is going in. If I can make one friendly suggestion, it's that you should come up with more insults than the classic 'Jedi scum', cos if you repeat the same insult or phrase too often, it kind of loses ts effect :P Like, I said, just a suggestion.
Other than that, great chapter!