Reviews for A Lesson In Dying |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I FINALLY FOUND AN AWESOME FIC TO READ. PLEASE CONTINUE. THANK YOU. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm already in love with your story tbqh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome I wonder what'll happen next! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, can't wait to see how things turn out as far as her plans go. and i am super curious to see what happens next, so please update this again soon! |
![]() ![]() Looking forward to the academy. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sad that her mother in this world was killed :( I wonder what her training to be a ninja will be like. Also what timeline is this in, from the tags is it somewhere where Kushina and Minato are still around and during the third war? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bad choice obviously. And the only reason not to be a civilian who trains in Konoha is Danzo. Oh well, i suppose shadow clone can be useful to multitask even in civilian engineering pursuits (shadow clone memory retention is such a fucking cheat that it better give out aneurysm like candy to anyone not a Tailed beast container from prolonged use, otherwise every fucking chunin ninja would use them in training). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this is not another fic that takes a page out of Sakura ridiculous inner personality troubles. Multiple personality is such a ridiculous trope... |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoo! can't wait to see how things turn out in the academy i'm curious who she'll bump into there. so please update this again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story I like your story so far please update |
![]() ![]() I like the way you're not just letting your oc get over the reincarnation thing. I wonder how that will effect her career as a ninja though? |
![]() ![]() Interesting take on the rebirth line, looking forward to seeing where this goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting first chapter! I loved the way you managed to convey the chaos of what's happening to the main character in such a simple way. I'm not a huge fan of self inserts, but I do love original characters so I thought I'd give this a try and I have to say, I may just start giving self inserts a chance :) Hope you get the inspiration to continue the series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh boy. sounds like she's got some trouble dealing with that accident. love how you have bits of that interrupting the flow of the story though! it's definitely something i haven't seen before and i like it can't wait to see what happens next though! i'm excited to read more. |