Fantastic read, started it as a bit of a joke not expecting to love the story as much as I did.

Si c'est entre le café et le thé, serait-ce de la chicorée du nord de la France, une racine torréfié et broyé?

Absolutely a fantastic read. Wish there was a little more of an epilogue but wonderful anyway

That was an amazing and enjoyable story, thank you so much for writing it!

Had a really bad feeling about voldemort in this story. So i am glad how you handled him. Respect

An extremely well-done crossover. I loved it overall. it had some issues, such as how old Voldy was taken care of, but outside of that, I'd rate this story an 8.89.1 out of 10.

Thanks for the story, Author.

It's around 3am and I am mentally CACKLING

I don't understand why Dumbledore allows so many students to view Harry's life in SAO.

Is he only allowed to do that ? It's a private matter and on top of that, this public exposure threatens Harry's privacy (because a lot of these moments are of a private nature) and safety (considering how much it exposes him : people who aren't close to him will have access to informations they have no business knowing and will be able to exploit it accordingly).

It's practically a public rape at this point.

i'm lost, and couldn't find a comment to answer my question: what is Furinken district in Nerima? Is it something very obscure or am I just dumb?

These outside chapters are so unbelievably boring that they bring the story down. It would be fine without the voyeurism and outside crap.

Its also nearly impossible to follow who is who with all the needless crossovers, OCs and background characters brought to the forefront.

Secret logout spot?

The Voldemort stuff actively hurts this story. I honestly couldn't care less sbout hi plotting. In fact all the real world stuff in this story is pretty boring.

This chapter was really boring. It was hard to follow who was who in the hospital and the rest was a rehash of what we've seen.

There is no point in the 'project' at Hogwarts either since they can't do anything about it. They are just watching Harry like a sick form of entertainment whilst saying it is a project.

Hi there,

This is my second read through of the entire story, and it’s been wonderful to see how the story develops. It’s simple, yet it gives a good plot to describe the action and development of Harry and friends.

I do have one criticism about this though; it’s more like wondering why would Dumbledore share so much about what’s going on with Harry with other students? I get Hermione and his close friends, but other students? I don’t follow the logic for it. It’s like a principal sharing a video of a student’s accident at a school assembly.

So I guess what I’m saying is, there should more of a logic to do so; it’s strange to share such moments that Harry is going through with a bunch of strangers.

Thanks for the writing!