| Reviews for Naruto The Demonic Pokegirl |
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   Cullzilla chapter 6 . 7/1/2019 I can't wait for the next chapter and hope it is uploaded soon. I am really liking this story and can't wait for future chapters. |
| kitsune2020 chapter 1 . 6/10/2019 more more MORE NOW |
| KEVIN chapter 6 . 3/27/2018 More please |
| Griffin87443 chapter 6 . 10/31/2017 Dam this story is awesome and hot keep the story up and update soon |
| Sam Stewart chapter 6 . 8/31/2017 Please continue this story soon? |
| ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 1/20/2017 Ch 6 ODE HEKA - OF THE OLD GOD'S AND HELL AND NIGHT 13 OF THE MOON AND THE GODDES OF THE MOON HEKATA AND THE SPIRITS OF JUSTICE AND VENGEANCE LET THAT DARK SOUL PERISH FROM EXISTENCE FOREVER AND EVER MORE . Now is only Orochimaru , His trusty medic to be in the correct path, Lesson For Nagato Pain Uzumaki , And Tobi Madara Uchiha Few corrupted governments and the heaven will shine. Update please. |
| Stephen6089 chapter 1 . 12/22/2016 there is a similar storie I forgot thename of it but ifany body nows it please message me |
| DemonOfThePlains chapter 6 . 8/31/2016 great story hope you continue updating it soon |
| hero of time45 chapter 2 . 5/23/2016 Nope i saw genderbend and im nopeing right on out |
| ps2boy.zachary chapter 6 . 5/2/2016 its nice good work. |
| bilingualkyuubi chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 Reread third paragraph. There is no rule that every sentence in English needs to start with "He". Also your story start as giant blocks of text, this makes it harder to read. Creative writing is not an essay, you are allowed to hit the enter key, cause you aren't just grouping by topic, your using paragraphs and punctuation to manipulate the flow of the story. As for actual content, good enough concept, decent hook, some inklings of plot which is what you want in a first chapter. But some points of contention, why does naruto know what the artifacts are. He doesn't need to know what they are he just has to feel they are dangerous. It has the same effect but is less pulled out of nowhere. Alternatively naruto could read the writing on the wall and say something about the artifacts so that way it keeps him in sync with them. |
| Galaxy Blaze chapter 5 . 3/5/2016 good story but you are about to ruin it with the harem. should have no more than 15(and that's being generous), otherwise it takes away from the story |
| Raikaguken chapter 5 . 3/4/2016 she says filthy ningen because she's a immortal goddes right? btw do her partners/mates become immortal like her? |
| Poke'boy24 chapter 4 . 3/2/2016 I vote Ino and will the girls in Naruto/Astrid harem have Pokegirl forms as well. |
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 3/2/2016 great beginning |