Reviews for Naruto The Demonic Pokegirl
Cullzilla chapter 6 . 7/1/2019
I can't wait for the next chapter and hope it is uploaded soon. I am really liking this story and can't wait for future chapters.
kitsune2020 chapter 1 . 6/10/2019
more more MORE NOW
KEVIN chapter 6 . 3/27/2018
More please
Griffin87443 chapter 6 . 10/31/2017
Dam this story is awesome and hot keep the story up and update soon
Sam Stewart chapter 6 . 8/31/2017
Please continue this story soon?
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 1/20/2017
Ch 6 ODE HEKA -
OF THE OLD GOD'S AND HELL AND NIGHT 13 OF THE MOON AND THE GODDES OF THE MOON HEKATA AND THE SPIRITS OF JUSTICE AND VENGEANCE LET THAT DARK SOUL PERISH FROM EXISTENCE FOREVER AND EVER MORE .

Now is only Orochimaru , His trusty medic to be in the correct path, Lesson For Nagato Pain Uzumaki , And Tobi Madara Uchiha Few corrupted governments and the heaven will shine.

Update please.
Stephen6089 chapter 1 . 12/22/2016
there is a similar storie I forgot thename of it but ifany body nows it please message me
DemonOfThePlains chapter 6 . 8/31/2016
great story hope you continue updating it soon
hero of time45 chapter 2 . 5/23/2016
Nope i saw genderbend and im nopeing right on out
ps2boy.zachary chapter 6 . 5/2/2016
its nice good work.
bilingualkyuubi chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
Reread third paragraph. There is no rule that every sentence in English needs to start with "He". Also your story start as giant blocks of text, this makes it harder to read. Creative writing is not an essay, you are allowed to hit the enter key, cause you aren't just grouping by topic, your using paragraphs and punctuation to manipulate the flow of the story.

As for actual content, good enough concept, decent hook, some inklings of plot which is what you want in a first chapter. But some points of contention, why does naruto know what the artifacts are. He doesn't need to know what they are he just has to feel they are dangerous. It has the same effect but is less pulled out of nowhere. Alternatively naruto could read the writing on the wall and say something about the artifacts so that way it keeps him in sync with them.
Galaxy Blaze chapter 5 . 3/5/2016
good story but you are about to ruin it with the harem. should have no more than 15(and that's being generous), otherwise it takes away from the story
Raikaguken chapter 5 . 3/4/2016
she says filthy ningen because she's a immortal goddes right? btw do her partners/mates become immortal like her?
Poke'boy24 chapter 4 . 3/2/2016
I vote Ino and will the girls in Naruto/Astrid harem have Pokegirl forms as well.
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
great beginning
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