Reviews for Seven Things
orangepine chapter 7 . 7/30
Lmaooo Jeanne is so weird i love her. It was great (and hilarious) to see her talk to Lily and them being straight with each other. Girls sticking together even if you don’t necessarily want to be friends with each other, you know?

Glad we got to see the rest of the marauders one last time before the story ended too. The whole boy band thing was really on brand i thought, and their friendship and shennanigens translated really well into this AU

Last but not least, i’m obviously over the freaking moon and exploding stars (SIGH) about the lovebirds god they are such dorks and i love them so much and i love that they love each other so much.

Thank you for writing this story! I’m glad I came by here after seeing your a/n on Time Lapse, which I’m just excited to read, especially since I can sort of join in with you as the story progresses, if that doesn’t sound weird? I’ll for sure be reading more of your work when i can next run away from adulting, and thanks again for sharing all of this with us!
orangepine chapter 6 . 7/30
I didn’t think it was possible to love James more but here i am. swooning. again.

I’m glad you’ve given Jeanne such consideration within this story and that her feelings are taken into account without making her a villain, even though it seems this may cause obstacles in the main love story

Speaking of which, lily and james confessed their loveeeeeee omg. I’m over here squealing about it as if i didnt know it was going to happen at some point lmao but it was so CUTE i love how you wrote it
orangepine chapter 5 . 7/30
This was so CUTE. I may actually be in love with your james. Your hogwarts sounds absolutely delightful too

Brb i need to recover from swooning over the bucketful of roses how dare the marauders be this outrageously charming honestly
orangepine chapter 4 . 7/29
I feel like Lily and I are on the same wavelengths this chapter, I laughed out loud when she called james the king of dorks hahaha. Definitely had conversations like this with my friends too

Speaking of, that was delightful how SMOOTHLY you explained the series of events within the conversation like I hardly even know I’m reading. Sirius’s dialogue was top notch too btw so adorable and yet a rascal all the same
orangepine chapter 3 . 7/29
I’m giggling like a school girl oh my HEART

Also Teresa is so entertaining I love how mad she gets lmao
orangepine chapter 2 . 7/29
Okay it’s established, this story’s glorious. I so so loved your description of the “before”, the “during” and the “after”. At the risk of sounding extremely corny and silly, your words make me feel like I’m flying. If that makes sense? I can’t believe you didn’t expect reviews for this, and I’m so glad you got the well deserved love even while writing!
orangepine chapter 1 . 7/29
Forever loling at that entrance you gave james - im imagining that james somehow heard the narration and went like, extra headache you say? That’s my cue! What a dork i love him

The writing is beautiful as always, and I love the way you’ve laid the foundation of the story and the characters in such an entertaining way. Really curious about the history that james and lily clearly have between them - and the girl?! And on that note I shall proceed to the next chapter see you there i’m so sorry about all the spam you’re about to receive from me
Windfall chapter 7 . 6/7
I liked the universe this fic was set in. Really well written, but the best part is easily that James' ex is not the typical 'cheating slag' trope. You did not embellish one character to make the rest look better.
Moon Monkeys chapter 1 . 5/23
This was excellentI loved the cute dialogue, it wasn't really mushy but just right. Great job, I'm keen tk see what things your right next.
Wisdomsqueen chapter 7 . 3/30
JohAlyss chapter 6 . 2/26
If you hadnt noticed, I have reviewed before and it's been almost a year since i first read this masterpiece of a fic and i keep coming back to it. By now, i think ive read it over 10 times and it's just as good as the first time. It has become the embodiment of happiness to me so thank you
sand beneath our feet chapter 7 . 10/28/2017
Aw this was so good!
sand beneath our feet chapter 4 . 10/28/2017
I love this chapter so much! You are an amazing writer thank you for writing this it is beautiful and also apologies for my crazy, half-incomprehensible last review...
sand beneath our feet chapter 3 . 10/28/2017
AAAAAAGH the amazing kiss was for a play you are genius and gaaaaah twisted I was so excited for this and now Im so excited for whatever is coming next but still I was not expecting this!
kperu chapter 7 . 10/24/2017
My goodness! This was beautiful! Reading it was such a pleasure! So much giddiness! I love it! Great job! Your writing is incredible. You can portray so much with your words! I could imagine myself there! Thank you for this!
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