Reviews for Naruto Banished
Mauricegilderg1 chapter 8 . 8/14
Best story ever keep making stories like this an you'll be a ster
omegaderose chapter 4 . 7/17
that story is from wattpad
nickknack2000 chapter 6 . 3/5
It is a thing to call someone granduncle
colebryant246 chapter 1 . 2/12
terrible fucking grammar!
colebryant246 chapter 1 . 2/12
terrible fucking grammar!
golddust35 chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
sorry but the uzumaki were destroyed in the second war cuz kushina came to the leaf as a young child and the first hokages wife was still alive when she arrived
E.Richtofen chapter 8 . 8/10/2017
This was a great story in many aspects:
• A powerful Naruto.
• Naruto leaves the village fanfic.
• NaruHina (I wasn't even looking for pairings, but this just makes it even better)
• Team 7 (exception of Naruto) bashing.
• Konoha placed in a miserable state.

This could potentially have been one of my favorite fanfictions, but there was a few issues with it.
• It was rushed.
• Very little content.
• Too many random factors and people just popping up (could be related to it being rushed).
• A few syntax/semantic errors scattered throughout the chapter.
• Characters were a little too OOC.

As far as my reading experience goes, this was a nice read with very good chapter lengths. There wasn't many fight scenes, which can be a good or bad. I actually really loved it, and it will definitely go into my pile of fanfiction that I should read again.
E.Richtofen chapter 4 . 8/9/2017
Team 7 is freaking delusional, I think it's been well established that their ties to Naruto have been cut clean, after the crap they pulled. Also, the story has been improving in all aspects. By that I mean, the pacing is better, there are less semantic/syntax errors, and the plot is getting better. I can't wait to see what Team 7 will try next to win Naruto back, but I'm certain it will be futile.
E.Richtofen chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
This was a great start and the plot is good, but I found a few issues. There are spelling errors in more than half this first chapter. The characters are very OOC, it doesn't really feel much like the original cast and the story feels very rushed. Aside from that, I did enjoy it and I will definitely continue reading. After all, who doesn't like a good "Konoha done screwed up with Naruto" up story.
Game boy chapter 8 . 7/26/2017
Very nice I loved it.
Thatrandomguy chapter 8 . 1/5/2017
I liked it it was pretty good keep writing stories though there were some moments when I felt things were a bit rushed but otherwise it was great thought there's always room for improvment you have potential to make better stories than this one
arinasution5 chapter 8 . 11/7/2016
randomfandom001 chapter 8 . 8/9/2016
id rate 10 out of 10 if i were official but still its good
Monster King chapter 8 . 7/1/2016
Good though short story liked how little people got bashed despite this being a banishment fic you did a good job with the plot as well all in all a good job
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 3/30/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
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