Um. . .

Scratch out the part about the "Hellraiser" T.C.

I've worked on it and tested it out using the ZDooM source port, and I realized it was TOO cheesy and crappy.

To the next one I go! _-

yay! it'll stay seto/tea! good choice! continue! i love it!

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Japanese Badass said:

"Personally, I do not like Serenity/Yugi fics too much. Besides, in the actaul show, Serenity DOES become Kaiba's girlfriend! Kaiba is my favorite character, a Badass Anti-Hero that doesn't care what anybody thinks of him. If you want my opnion: Drop the Yugi/Serenity! Maybe that's TOO much."

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No now go away.

I DON'T CARE WHAT HAPPENS IN THE SHOW. IMO, Yugi and Serenity are like, TEN TIMES BETTER than Seto/Serenity and Yugi/Tea (I don't like these pairings; Yugi/Serenity is the only YGO pairing that makes me happy).

In fact, I have made an anti-Yugi/Tea pic with the Doomguy in it, and he's seen walking away carrying red spray paint. I'm also planning to use that pic for a Doom TC I am legalizing called "Hellraiser: Hellbound."

Fantasizer, take your time and keep it up! ;)

This is great and i cant wait till you update but please make the chapters longer. Till next time. Later Dayz!

Sincerly Black Dragon

P.S. Could you read my other story? its at . its called Why Me? by Black Dragon

YAY! Good! More!

This is excellent! You go girl! Go go go go go! P p : ) : p :P _ ] : ] )

DO TEA/SETO, DO TEA/SETO! I BEG YOU, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE

~~*Shinaka*~~

*licks off the frosting on my pinky*

Me: Cake is, m!m! good!

Mai and Tea: *exchanges weird glances, and starts to move away*

Me: Wait up for me!

Mai and Tea: Starts to run as fast as possible.

Me: Fantasizer! Good story about cake! *trips*

Seto: *looks from Kaiba Corp, and shakes his head, " I guess some people just kind of get addicted to Joseph Wheeler."

Me: SHUT UP!

Aww come on, Tea/Seto!

NOO DON'T KICK IT! TEA/SETO FOREVER LOL!

Seto/Tea! Please! If you do kick the Seto/Tea stuff out I'll probably stop reading since I don't like to see Yugi paired with Serenity. WRITE MORE!

I really would like to see Kaiba/Tea romance and Yugi/Serenity.

YES! Of course you should add Seto/Tea couple. I love that pairing and I never see a whole lot of them. So please put it up. Please? Well I would also like it if you could email me and tell me when you update or you could do it just to talk. Doesn't matter to me. I love making new friends. Later Dayz!

Sincerly Black Dragon

P.S. I also ask that you please read my stories if you want to and have the time to.

For your question of whether to throw in Seto/Tea:

I would say. KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT! KEEP IT!

Personally, I do not like Serenity/Yugi fics too much. Besides, in the actaul show, Serenity DOES become Kaiba's girlfriend! Kaiba is my favorite character, a Badass Anti-Hero the doesn't care what anybody thinks of him. If you want my opnion: Drop the Yugi/Serenity! Maybe that's TOO much. JUst keep Kaiba/Tea pleease! P

That was really good! I like this fic! I think you have a lot of originality and put your own style of writing into this piece of work. You put yourself as the characters, and because of that, your writing is great!

As for the pairings, I like Seto/Tea, so that's fine with me. You shouldn't change that pairing, because I support Yami/Tea Seto/Tea Bakura/Tea and Malik/Tea, and I like the Yugi/Serenity pairing. It's very cute _. Basically, I think the pairings are fine, and you should just do whatever pairing you like. If I absolutely HATED a pairing, I wouldn't write about it. So don't do a couple that you don't like. I think you're fine with this pairings, and what you chose first.

Anyways, update soon please! I'll be waiting to review _!

*~Lili~*