|Reviews for Moments
| Marina Ka-Fai chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
That was super cute and super sad, you hit my feels!
| Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
[he finds comfort in the near solitude she finds there and with a trembling hand, she lights a candle to the Mother; her voice shaking as she kneels and prays from a healthy babe.]
Remember to use sentence-connecting semicolons sparingly and only when the ideas in the clauses are inseparable.
[Tells her to breath,]
It's breathe. Breath is the air expelled from the lungs when you breathe. Breathing is drawing breath.
It's a cute start! I really wish there was a bit more time showing instead of telling, like when Rhaella spends time with Viserys, we're only told this without getting an example as to what they do together.