Reviews for Thaumaturgic Awakening |
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Guest chapter 23 . 12/10 I'm going to miss this story very much, it's a pity that it's incomplete |
The Timeline chapter 23 . 10/6 Or maybe you just die sorry i forget that this can be a option woth stories written more then 6 years ago Damn i feel old 2018 was 6 frecking years ago |
The Timeline chapter 23 . 10/6 Damn you’re a monster leaving us with a damn dead story that is better than like 75% of the story that are finished. |
FiendLurcher chapter 18 . 8/25 Taylor gon keep up with him. |
FiendLurcher chapter 17 . 8/25 "traditional sense word" "e-emailed it" The term "Children of Nidhogg" is used contradictorily in this chapter; I suspect the second use is erronous. And good god, how much thought have you put into this? |
FiendLurcher chapter 15 . 8/25 Hell yeah. |
FiendLurcher chapter 8 . 8/25 "lighting blows" I suspect this should be "lightning blows" "shill screams" ought be "shrill screams"? |
FiendLurcher chapter 4 . 8/24 The magecraft in this fic has a very peculiar and unique feel. Usually, in fanfiction it's rather puerile and performative, magus this magus that, lacking in substance. But you paint with a very convincing brush, better than I certainly ever could. |
FiendLurcher chapter 2 . 8/24 lmao that ending had me in stitches |
Taryth chapter 23 . 6/10 At first, I skipped this fic since the summary wasnt very descriptive, but after giving it a chance, I found it was an extremely well written and intriguing story. I hope this gets updated in the future, theres so many things I want to know more about, like talking to Cauldron, how powers interact with circuits, and more povs on thoughts about the 09 team |
Ariel Juarez chapter 23 . 5/13 Too bad this story is dropped... |
scyfly chapter 3 . 1/28 it is an interesting enough plot, aside from zelretch inmediatly noticing the dimensional breaches and zeroing in on them, but the story itself is kinda boring. i guess its because the magi had months of set up and taylor is now catching up instead of leading her own story? |
scyfly chapter 1 . 1/28 there is no way in hell rin would let lung life yeah only thing asian about rin is her manga style face. |
scyfly chapter 5 . 1/28 so earth bet is capable of magic, without gaia or apostles to interfere yet somehow no one in history has used it? yeah that maked total sense. you just flubbed your crossover |
scyfly chapter 4 . 1/28 yeah all this should be summed up as, i did training, with one or two short flash backs so that you can focus on the plot. im not even sure them going for the undersiders instead of ppl with real knowledge makes much sense |