Reviews for HV-S01: Red Knight Redemption
Guest chapter 11 . 5/21/2020
Read your second story before this one. The other one is much better. Here, you have a god like OC that is afraid of doing anything. Very boring. Glad I did not read this story first or I wouldn't have bothered to read your other one.
narutodarkfan chapter 36 . 4/29/2020
Is the Soul of Fire a dark souls reference?
narutodarkfan chapter 15 . 4/25/2020
I know I'm reality late to this. sorry that I don't write reviews. I'm an unimaginative don't who can't think of anything else but "this I like". loving your work so far.
my favourite BGM would be Hikari to Yami (from original Bhusal novel, not the results nua one) because and Emiya theme.
ChiDead chapter 58 . 4/19/2020
Honestly that was a beautiful read. Subarashii
Isaac LB chapter 1 . 4/16/2020
Damn, the whole house fell down the hill.
Waterflames3 chapter 30 . 4/13/2020
Dark souls?
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 4 . 3/11/2020
Holy shit things make so much more sense now. I should've read this first. By the way are you using Moon Cells' rules or the regular FATE system for the servent Parameters
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 3 . 3/11/2020
By thou suggestion I readth thee and I don't regret it one bit
jifizha chapter 7 . 2/7/2020
is it just me or it change its pov too much it make one confused
AlernateReality chapter 36 . 2/1/2020
This is well written, but I dislike the interpretation of Shirou and Scathach. Now, I understand you wrote this earlier and it could have been before Scathach's personality is known, but a HV Shirou would you admitted to "wanting to save everyone" and even tried to save a demon WOULD NOT torture Scathach. That's absolutely against everything he stands for as a hero. Sure, kill her but torture? Never
FanFictionman43 chapter 9 . 1/29/2020
Beat his ass Shirou
Issei ODR chapter 58 . 1/10/2020
Por fin terminé de leer el libro y me encantó aunque me hubiera gustado saber que más les sucedio a todos los demás.
Tenma Kirin chapter 2 . 12/31/2019
Hoho, Mordred Tsundere?
zeek17 chapter 18 . 12/7/2019
I'm proud of you, Mordred." - Cecilia
Uday Sra chapter 58 . 11/30/2019
Awesome. can you please do a character sheet for gilgamesh
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