I enjoy ALL of your stories and in the way you add your 'spin' without changing the characters (too much). But then, the changes that you do make also make the worlds enjoyable. I was wondering if you can send over some of the Patty's episodes for SoH - Sorry, I live on a tight budget and can't help out (YAY FanFiction).

pretty good start.

Was rereading "FILFY Teacher" when I spotted your comments on this story, either I missed it before or it didn't register.

But as an Arkos shipper, let me make this very clear to you, you did NOTHING wrong.

Alongside "Dreaming of the Phoenix" and their "Naruto - Life as a Devil", I'd consider these stories to be examples of a non Arkos story done right.

In damn near every other story, they're either dumping on Jaune or they make Pyrrha seem like a shallow bint.

Not the case here or in Dreaming's story. It's still Pyrrha as she was up to her demise.

You've also treated Jaune fairly.
So yeah, this not being an Arkos story isn't the capital crime you seem to think it is. Least not to me anyway. *shrugs*

Good work

Sucks the traps didn't work out!

ozpins soul needs to be purged

I don’t really enjoy it when you de-escalate the abilities of grim in comparison to a normal animal. In this chapter you say that the supernatural shadow beast known as a Beowulf has worse heating than a wolf and worse sense of smell than a dog. Why? Why de-escalate a threat when you could escalate it and make the characters use their special techniques (like the soul of ice or the Umi-sen-ken) in order to avoid detection. Also why didn’t Ranma or Beni use the Hiru-shoten-ha in the battle for the school in Vacuo, the grim would have plenty of negative energy to provide the heat needed for it. A lot of techniques not being used. It’s just odd that Ranma used the Moko Takabisha before any of the other techniques. Although he shouldn’t know the Mōko here as the first nanban mirror episode is 37 and the second is episode 45. The Mōko Takabisha isn’t until episode 123.. although this would also rule out the Hiryu Shoten ha in episode 50.

Damn his Ki reserves were depleted that quickly? So he probably haven't trained himself enough that he'd reach Happosai or Cologne's level yet but considering they're hundreds of years old I guess that's fair.

Necesito maaaas

Thanks for the novel thus far! Looking forward to the future, and even though it looks like Ranma is leaning towards Pyrrha than Yang (and as stated in the description, he won't be polygamous), the byplay is still gorgeous to watch. Also looking forward to more of how Glynda Goodwitch slowly falls to female-Ranma's (whose name I forget) wiles.

Man this was a good chapter, I enjoyed the fall and how it was portrayed here better than in the original inspiration story

Good work as usual love your stories, even if I complain.

meh a little disappointed he ain't gonna be a student. moving a little to fast for my liking, oh well. Good story still.

Just like that? No man the way he interacted with Ozpin and accepted is wierd man... It feel like you forced to keep him in cannon plot.

by the way? magic DOES exist in RWBY. it was added by Oum himself just before he died. later seasons expanded on it. Salem and Ozpin have magic. Salem uses it to control the Grimm, Ozpin's magic is the source of his body hopping immortality. well that and divine empowerment/curse depending on which one you are talking about. salem is cursed, ozpin is empowered.

but salems magic was one of the last additions Oum added to the show before his passing. so magic DOES exist in Remnant, it is simply beyond rare. and the current incarnation of humanity has no ability to use it. Salem and ozpin are from the first iteration of humanity, whole different set of rules there.