This WAS FANTASTIC

I was unexpectedly hit with such anxiety,emotional turmoil, and feels from this.
Great work.

Left me speechless.

great story only bad thing is that it took me so long to finish reading it

I was hooked pretty much straight away I love time travelling stories and I've never read one like this it's amazing and the plot heart breaking and heart warming

Nice, Jori that seems doomed to fail and by all rights probubly should and yet, a second chance makes all the difference. Gotta love time travel and what you can accomplish because of it.

EXCUSE ME?
MY FEELINGS?

Thanks, this is just brilliant. I totally love this.

Awesome story. I really love your work, started reading this story about 11 or 12 last night finished at 7:30 this morning. Keep up the great work!

Holy h*ll I feel like I just got off a roller coaster in finishing this story. It had me on edge from start to finish. I LOVED it! Great job :D

hey, I would have PMed u but I'm just a new user. anyways I want to congratulate you on a job well done on this story but I have a job for you if u don't mind. there is an author who wrote fanfic on challenges. he is I AM NOT TIM. I like his story but he never conclude it so I am wondering if you can do it. there are nice sequels to the story and you can do them all. thanks for reading this

Great story once again.

Quitting time, you're the best!

Sad to see this one eND.

This was a great ride. I loved how that boy Jade helped save unwittingly paid it forward.

Who knows? Maybe it was a dream. What's important is they're old and more in love than ever.

That's pretty nuts. I'm glad Jade made it.

Somehow

Without Kiefer Sutherland to inject restored memories, Jade had to rely on this code which she luckily brok .

But did she Crack it in time?