Reviews for Not this time, Fate
Guest chapter 51 . 5/8
Great story all the way through. Loved every bit. Have you ever thought of coming back for one chapter to give a perspective from the arc family as soon as Jayne left the bullhead to head back to beacon?
Monster King chapter 51 . 5/10
Awesome work
TheWonderfulGuy chapter 7 . 4/23
bro loving your story, hope you keep up the good work
Toa Naruto chapter 25 . 4/22
Too funny. Now I can't stop imagining Zwei's defense of his "kennel" behaving like those two corgi siblings on YouTube that growl and snap at the air In front of each other for a brief moment, before calming down and going their separate ways.
spectra1947 chapter 51 . 4/17
wow, just wow. that was an amazing story!
Mr.Destructo chapter 51 . 4/16
ill be honest a lot of the story felt more like it deserved a drama/angst tags rather than adventure/romance but it was good overall
InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 51 . 4/12
Thinking over this story again and just realized that the whole fate thing means Jaune spent that whole time without a semblance
InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 51 . 4/9
Very good story extremely on point with comedy I laughed a lot at this story. I'm a little down ab the Fate deus ex machina and no Salem inclusion but it makes sense that you don't want to make this run for another 300 chapters.
InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 37 . 4/9
Qroq would absolutely destroy Neo imo
InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 35 . 4/9
How is Neo with Cinder? She would not have liked her considering how much she despised Roman and you know threatened his life to make him work for her
InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 34 . 4/9
Also I think it's a little off that Ozpin doesn't have Vale in the palm of his hand. I'm not sure ab Canon but it seems to me that he would have influence everywhere
InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 26 . 4/9
So I don't know if this story was just written a long time ago or what but it seems pretty off that Jaune has been at this for centuries and 1 doesn't know who Salem or ozpin are 2 doesn't know who the maidens are at least it doesn't seem like it and 3 hasn't found a way to counter cinder yet even when he has all the time in the world
sahhhhhh chapter 51 . 4/9
GOAT level, easily top 5 story ive ever read, you guys are incredible, thank you for everything
Mr.Destructo chapter 12 . 4/7
i think a bruise and a piercing injury are completely different things you can wrap a human in armor and still bruise them without the armor being cut through i think its more of a flexible shield that blunts impacts
tommthecommie chapter 40 . 4/5
Weiss is Anakin.
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