this version of Jaune as of chapter 4 really reminds me of Archer Emiya and i like it because of how it contrasts with canon

As this is the third time now that I have to turn to a box of tissues after rereading this particular story, I want to say thank you. Thank you for writing such heart-wrenching and emotional stories with the characters we already know and love, giving them a second chance to be all that we know they could and more. You deserve the world and more for your writing sir, and I wish you well.

You know. It's been years since i last read this. Enjoying it a lot. However, I almost want to see a rematch.

Poor Cinder. So desperate to not have her plans smote across the countryside by the lunatic Jaune Arc and the rest of the Jazz Club. It doesn't matter if she tries to recruit him, seduce him, bribe him, or even kill him, whatever plan she concocts fails. Even if he falls, he brings about her end.

It doesn't even seem to matter if Salem herself shows up, she always winds up in the tower, dying, watching everything she worked for burning away.

Of course, she only went for his family that one time... and now she is having those nightmare fuel flashbacks again.

After centuries of losses to him, there has to be a way! She doesn't even remember why she wanted to work with Salem in the first place anymore! She just needs to win at least once!

Anyways this story brings me back to when I liked RWBY.

Be well, sir. Hope life treats you well.

Lost interest after Jaune stayed after the first semester. Liked the idea of jaune hating to be a hunter. You ruined the idea.

people can say what they want. But I love this ending. Im happy i read it. Even if I wanted at least another aftermath chapter

Hahaha should not have tempted fate

Man this fic is so worth having reread it. It's so good

Thank you for your writing. It is a wonderfull story that evoked a lot of emotions and was/is sometimes too bitter in bittersweet but carried the undertone of hope. I enjoyed reading it imensely.

I'm glad that you had Jaune actually WANT to mend his bond with his family instead of just 'peace sign' dipping.

Well I don't know about you but if I ever write a fic from Beacon's side, Roman and Neo's plot armor will crumble.

You've managed to make it so I couldn't hate Jaune or Weiss or anyone here...
What am I supposed to do with this sh!t? (unused artillery shells)

The last few chapters gave me a rollercoaster of emotions. I cried a couple of times honestly. This story, it's beautiful in the emotions it can carry and convey to the reader. I love it simply. This right here is the reason I love this type of work. You took a story, changed it and made something different and beautiful from it. A work of art.

Rereading this again, I think it is one of the best things you have written.

This is probably my favorite story out of all of yours, probably topping Relic of the Future as well. i couldnt stop reading and hoping he would succeed in this run! Im satisfied with the ending, but what i exoected was that Jaune was wrestle control from Fate, and instead would become Fate itself. Or at least simply free himself from its control. An epilogue with their children would of been beautiful but im happy with how you ended it!

Man, weiss is gonna be pissed when she realizes he wasnt talking about himself