| Reviews for Not this time, Fate |
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  Guest chapter 51 . 5/8 Great story all the way through. Loved every bit. Have you ever thought of coming back for one chapter to give a perspective from the arc family as soon as Jayne left the bullhead to head back to beacon? |
 Monster King chapter 51 . 5/10 Awesome work |
| TheWonderfulGuy chapter 7 . 4/23 bro loving your story, hope you keep up the good work |
| Toa Naruto chapter 25 . 4/22 Too funny. Now I can't stop imagining Zwei's defense of his "kennel" behaving like those two corgi siblings on YouTube that growl and snap at the air In front of each other for a brief moment, before calming down and going their separate ways. |
| spectra1947 chapter 51 . 4/17 wow, just wow. that was an amazing story! |
| Mr.Destructo chapter 51 . 4/16 ill be honest a lot of the story felt more like it deserved a drama/angst tags rather than adventure/romance but it was good overall |
| InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 51 . 4/12 Thinking over this story again and just realized that the whole fate thing means Jaune spent that whole time without a semblance |
| InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 51 . 4/9 Very good story extremely on point with comedy I laughed a lot at this story. I'm a little down ab the Fate deus ex machina and no Salem inclusion but it makes sense that you don't want to make this run for another 300 chapters. |
| InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 37 . 4/9 Qroq would absolutely destroy Neo imo |
| InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 35 . 4/9 How is Neo with Cinder? She would not have liked her considering how much she despised Roman and you know threatened his life to make him work for her |
| InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 34 . 4/9 Also I think it's a little off that Ozpin doesn't have Vale in the palm of his hand. I'm not sure ab Canon but it seems to me that he would have influence everywhere |
| InsaneSmirkingRevenge chapter 26 . 4/9 So I don't know if this story was just written a long time ago or what but it seems pretty off that Jaune has been at this for centuries and 1 doesn't know who Salem or ozpin are 2 doesn't know who the maidens are at least it doesn't seem like it and 3 hasn't found a way to counter cinder yet even when he has all the time in the world |
| sahhhhhh chapter 51 . 4/9 GOAT level, easily top 5 story ive ever read, you guys are incredible, thank you for everything |
| Mr.Destructo chapter 12 . 4/7 i think a bruise and a piercing injury are completely different things you can wrap a human in armor and still bruise them without the armor being cut through i think its more of a flexible shield that blunts impacts |
| tommthecommie chapter 40 . 4/5 Weiss is Anakin. |