Reviews for Humanity's Rebirth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The Citadel is nowhere near as a Type-2 civilization. Their civilization is rather weird and also predetermined by the Reapers machinations. They are entitled as below Type-2 and something along above Type-1 or less of it. The Citadel have never achieved as what mankind imagined in sc-fi scope like Dyson Sphere, particle accelerator, high-grade plasma tech and etc. I believed that TIM, The illusive Man, Jack Harper, downfall is mostly interacting with Reaper tech. Probably with one of his eyes that taken a piece from Reaper and crafted into a prosthetic eye. This allowed for a small-induced indoctrination that little by little corrupted TIM. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks to the guest below, saved a lot of time. Im a HFY guy, i almost got baited |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the guest commenting below warning that this fic was just bait and swtich, saved me a lot of time |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter and finding Voyager always was touching to me, even after all these years this chapter I find as one of the best I've read |
![]() ![]() I love this story! It is quite superb! Especially the hot FemShep Lesbo scene :3 I also love how you jebait all those Humanity Fuck Yeah! Crowd, having them expecting humanity to wage a war of genocide for revenge only to have them surrender to the citadel and have Femshep herald them into era of peace, tolerant, and understanding. It really show that humanity can move pass revenge and hate, very few story did that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If everyone here doesn’t like where this story headed then why not do your own? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why call it the 'United Human Empre', why not just the 'Human Empire' because they are already united. Also, why a chancellor? Isn't an emperor much better because it's common sense for an emperor to rule an empire |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty disappointed how the story ended good idea poor execution |
![]() ![]() Won’t the missiles still explode when shot down? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly lost interest here. Humanity doesn’t seem vengeful at all towards the council races, half the population of Earth was wiped out and the planet was “covered in radioactive craters” yet they sue for peace so quickly? This seemed more along the lines of ‘we have to take revenge’ rather than ‘we must take revenge’. Humanity was just going through the motions and as soon as the war wasn’t easy they gave up and settled for what they had. Smh |
![]() ![]() ![]() BURN THE HERETIC, KILL THE XENO, PURGE THE UNCLEAN! MASTER OF MANKIND GUIDE US! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this fic, it’s awesome! Thank you for writing and sharing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah this was a great fic all the way to ch4 then after you just started pandering to the aliens disregarding the genocide of humanity 900 years ago. Where’s the revenge, the unleashing of humanity’s wrath. Regardless I still read til its end and I have to say I’m disappointed, great premise though |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Hippie woke up! He won't be the last man on Mars! Love the Reference! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow after all of that and just like that we come in peace... This is just bad writing I mean your race nearly got wiped out 900 years ago, got back up with better weapons then you come for diplomatic talks and the civilians are just not throwing riot over it. I really hope your new fic the orion hunt is better than this |