Reviews for Humanity's Rebirth
sugoijack9 chapter 9 . 9/22
The Citadel is nowhere near as a Type-2 civilization. Their civilization is rather weird and also predetermined by the Reapers machinations. They are entitled as below Type-2 and something along above Type-1 or less of it. The Citadel have never achieved as what mankind imagined in sc-fi scope like Dyson Sphere, particle accelerator, high-grade plasma tech and etc.

I believed that TIM, The illusive Man, Jack Harper, downfall is mostly interacting with Reaper tech. Probably with one of his eyes that taken a piece from Reaper and crafted into a prosthetic eye. This allowed for a small-induced indoctrination that little by little corrupted TIM.
bruh45 chapter 1 . 8/2
Thanks to the guest below, saved a lot of time. Im a HFY guy, i almost got baited
Hypatius chapter 1 . 8/1
Thanks for the guest commenting below warning that this fic was just bait and swtich, saved me a lot of time
splash43 chapter 17 . 6/15
this chapter and finding Voyager always was touching to me, even after all these years this chapter I find as one of the best I've read
Guest chapter 22 . 4/4
I love this story! It is quite superb! Especially the hot FemShep Lesbo scene :3

I also love how you jebait all those Humanity Fuck Yeah! Crowd, having them expecting humanity to wage a war of genocide for revenge only to have them surrender to the citadel and have Femshep herald them into era of peace, tolerant, and understanding. It really show that humanity can move pass revenge and hate, very few story did that.
Coment9 chapter 22 . 4/3
If everyone here doesn’t like where this story headed then why not do your own?
Warriorking22 chapter 1 . 3/17
Why call it the 'United Human Empre', why not just the 'Human Empire' because they are already united. Also, why a chancellor? Isn't an emperor much better because it's common sense for an emperor to rule an empire
hardatwork1986 chapter 1 . 3/16
I'm pretty disappointed how the story ended good idea poor execution
Anon chapter 3 . 2/25
Won’t the missiles still explode when shot down?
clinttraper chapter 5 . 11/14/2022
I truly lost interest here. Humanity doesn’t seem vengeful at all towards the council races, half the population of Earth was wiped out and the planet was “covered in radioactive craters” yet they sue for peace so quickly? This seemed more along the lines of ‘we have to take revenge’ rather than ‘we must take revenge’. Humanity was just going through the motions and as soon as the war wasn’t easy they gave up and settled for what they had. Smh
Thefallenjedi66 chapter 3 . 10/30/2022
Tritio chapter 22 . 9/26/2022
I just found this fic, it’s awesome! Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Invictus602 chapter 22 . 7/24/2022
Yeah this was a great fic all the way to ch4 then after you just started pandering to the aliens disregarding the genocide of humanity 900 years ago. Where’s the revenge, the unleashing of humanity’s wrath. Regardless I still read til its end and I have to say I’m disappointed, great premise though
NotMordin chapter 10 . 6/20/2022
The Hippie woke up! He won't be the last man on Mars! Love the Reference!
valkrus chapter 5 . 5/4/2022
wow after all of that and just like that we come in peace... This is just bad writing I mean your race nearly got wiped out 900 years ago, got back up with better weapons then you come for diplomatic talks and the civilians are just not throwing riot over it. I really hope your new fic the orion hunt is better than this
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