Can't wait for more

When you post the next chapter ?

And now you're just going back to the original ME story copying every single thing. How did this happen? How did the absolutely xenofobic humans end up as mercenaries and strepteasers, people that just live on Omega of all places, something the humans didn't even have any contact with? Lazy

The only purpose of aliens in this fic appears to be making humans seem awesome. They haven't advanced their technologies in 900 years. They constantly discuss, even the Council member, between themselves how awesome the humans are. Their questions in dialogues are only there for humans to describe just how better their tech and culture is. Instead of being angry, making plans, discarding the new species as arrogant (and the humans are arrogant! The Council was there far sooner than the humans) after the UHE literally destroyed their homes (no matter what the Council did 900 years ago! Imagine native Americans releasing genocidal bioweapon that kills 99.5% of white American population claiming that 400 years ago the British did the same?) the aliens are in orgasmic awe. 900 years is also a completely unrealistic number. You might make a stretch that aliens don't advance for fear of AI and their governments being stagnant, but it's estimated that we (irl humans) will have true AI by 2070 with 60% certainty or by 2100 almost with 100% certainty. Yet in 900 years these humans only colonized a handful of planets?

How is Admiral Hackett, Shepard and all the others are there after 900 years?

So something to be aware of... there's no way in hell the leader of humanity would be summoned (or answer the summons) of the Council like a client race. They would summon the human ambassador just as the Chancellor would summon the Council ambassador on Earth. To be summoned shows subservience. No other country can just 'summons' the President and expect him to come just because they said so. You're contradicting your 'independent humanity' stance...

HOT DAMN! Glad to see you continuing this story. I have wait for this to continue for a long time. It is great to read a plot line that is not the same old copy of the game time line. Excellent story keep it up

I really enjoyed this fan fiction, having a totally different humanity really has made this story stand out. Definitely looking forward to seeing this completed at some stage.

Really miss this story

Painfully long wait for the next chapter

Fighter are useless in space get a AI or have them remote controlled so they can be turning on a dime

Hardlight can be used for everything weapons, shields, mega construction, etc...

Should have given them hardlight technology I mean scientists today say it’s theoretically possible

The citadel has like 1000 planets that enough for like 100 billion people humans have the void drive they can colonized away from the mass relays

The citadel races have a trillion people inside, a hundred billion wouldnt be so ludicrous to them and ten billion would be a single planet.