|Reviews for An Alternate Beginning|
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/7
NO! UPDATE! Yami was the one to give Shadi the peace right? PLEASE TELL ME IT'S ONE OF THOSE CLICHES WHERE THE HERO OR LOVER LIES TO THEIR LOVE TO KEEP THEM SAFE! UPDATE!
| Guest chapter 25 . 8/6/2015
| hama431 chapter 25 . 2/26/2015
Update the next chapter please
Will yami fall for yugi
Will yugi go back to yami
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/18/2015
Ummmm nine years? Realy? Wow. Just-wow.
| Yolo cake chapter 25 . 12/13/2014
I read the entire thing in less than 4 hours and to tell you I love every bit of it. Just one question...when's the sequel? You might not even get this as it has been eigheight years.
| Guest chapter 25 . 6/2/2014
awwww come ooooon i want to know what happens
| Mana's Madness chapter 25 . 4/6/2014
Huh?! Noooooooo! I wanted to at least know why Yami did what he did... Q_Q
This story is just so excellently written, despite the fact that it sometimes seems that words are missing and some parts such as Yuugi having green eyes seem odd to me, but damn it I absolutely love this fic. I highly doubt you would after eight years but I'm BEGGING you to continue sometime, even if you just chose to do a rewrite! I can't bear the thought that Yami just used Yuugi like that, there has to be another reason! Shadi took part of the puzzle to keep it from Malik, was he still being controlled? Or did Marik threaten to kill Yuugi if he didn't play along? I have to know! DX
| Songstress chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Wow i was really surprised this hadn't updated since i last saw it. You've got a great story here and I really hope you finish it :3 looking forward to another chapter in the future
| Crystia chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Hmmm. Kinda interesting.
| Silver-Haired-Thief chapter 25 . 8/14/2012
Good story :)
| Drawn2Danger chapter 25 . 4/3/2012
no no no no no! You can't just leave the story there! I have a hunch about Yami's actions and I need to know if I'm right! Plus this is possibly the best story I have ever read!
Please finish it!
| yamiyugilover chapter 25 . 2/28/2012
please update this story i whant to know what happens and dont dare no rite or i will send you to the shadow realm
| Kaaki Shaman chapter 25 . 8/13/2011
Oh gosh... Poor Yugi... YAMI YOU BASTARD! GAH, I wanna STRANGLE him now! ... *ends up crying along with Yugi* Dang it...
Oh gosh, that emotional stuff gets to me... Where's Yugi gone off to? Are you planning on updating this? Does Yami regret what he did? Was that all really just a twisted plot on his part? ... Of course, I DO remember that Malik had been inside his head's defenses so he could get the puzzle when Yugi might give it to him... So was it mind control? 'Cause, seriously, that whole confrontation seemed staged to me. :x
... *cries even MORE along with Yugi* Gah, so sad...
| andysanime chapter 25 . 8/1/2011
Really good job so far!
| myst-of-twilyte chapter 25 . 5/4/2011
I enjoyed this and your other stories immensely - your interpretation of the characters was simply refreshing - yami was definitely OOC but his character design fit into the story really well - I love his turmoil and how you set up the story to make us feel sorry for yami while at the same time wanting to slap him back into his senses! _ It's obviously been a while since you updated and I just wanted to know if you were still alive and had any plans of getting active - on or deviantart. I highly encourage you to come back and I will delightfully be there to support you with many more reviews if you do! And trust me i don't do that often - but you've made me slightly desperate! Look forward to seeing you active again if possible!