Reviews for When it All Comes Crashing
Cody Furlong chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Poor Jake, I hope he'll be alright. It looks good so far. I wonder what that mysterious jet was and if it'll be back? Keep it up, I look forward to seeing what comes next.
Exo-Toxicimpulse chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
aw man i can't wait 4 more plzz update soon ;) ur doin great :D keep it up
LaydeeGodiva chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Who is they mysterious other jet! AH! I gotta know! And, I think it's fun to pick on Jakes fragile little body. :D Get chp. 2 up soon!
AleGnA chapter 1 . 1/17/2003
oh that's goooood! You're a really good writer! Keep going! I wanna know what happens next!
Akari Jaganashi chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
Nice work so far! :) Keep up the good work!