|Reviews for The Name of the Game|
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/25
Jesus.. your pacing is atrocious and you have a heavy case of wordvomiting. The story should literally be like 20 to 30 percent of its current wordcount to be even half decent. More does not mean better.
| Ysoltea chapter 14 . 1/5
I swear to God if there comes a 21st night of September pun on the dates...
| AzureDragon363 chapter 33 . 12/13/2021
eagerly awaiting the next update! hope it's soon.
| dnahochburger1 chapter 1 . 12/9/2021
I just started rereading this story and just noticed how ridiculous the reason is for women to outnumber men.
Not a complaint, just an interesting observation.
| HellsMaji chapter 33 . 12/6/2021
Shame this story hasn't been updated in years. Though I guess I understand, it's a pretty bloated story. Over thirty chapters and 3/4 of a million words just to cover a month in story time. Sad to reach the end, though.
| HellsMaji chapter 32 . 12/6/2021
I'm gonna guess that the mama Lily that fell in lava is now a toddler in the company of an atlas black site.
| HellsMaji chapter 27 . 12/5/2021
This entire chapter all I could think was how this dumbass was going to give himself away with all his showboat sword twirling. He does it in all three forms. Plus all three are dual wielders. Anyways, why did he need to create aura transfer from scratch? He had already created aura transfusion to give aura to others.
| HellsMaji chapter 23 . 12/4/2021
Dunno how Ruby and Yang are going to explain having half a million lien between them. Jaune should definitely write the Harry Potter series and get it published, with all the necessary changes to make it better.
| HellsMaji chapter 20 . 12/4/2021
He waaay fucked up this chapter.. Seems like jaune also forgot that he left an entire, giant, puddle of blood behind at the Atlas base. Atlas should already know exactly who he is if he doesn't have very good luck. Which he doesn't, because he's being a dumbass about it. Shit, just put five points into luck idiot. Also, wouldn't surprise me if ozpin already knew exactly who he was, too. He's leaving a lot of clues everywhere, and he's actually not remotely as clever as he thinks.
| Leevisoukka chapter 1 . 11/27/2021
what the fuck is that ending?! xD bro . .own
| TigerJacob chapter 3 . 11/18/2021
I couldn't get past Vertigo this time. That might sound like a negative but it's not, I just refuse to listen to carry on my wayward son and start crying that this fic probs isn't getting finished. New fics have come and old fics have gone, but seeing this in a collab for best rwby fics hurt.
Fingers crossed this comes back, holding onto those pms of what's to come.
| WaleXdraK chapter 1 . 11/13/2021
If brunette is considered a real word then why wouldn’t greenete be considered one if a world where peoples can have natural green hair?
| Travis99 chapter 33 . 10/25/2021
Hope there is an update in the near future, this story is great.
| Guest chapter 33 . 10/24/2021
It’s a shame this story was abandoned. Maybe someone else will pick it up.
| Fanfic editor chapter 9 . 10/14/2021
Nice writing, very readable, I'm guessing the porn level is a stylistic choice, interested to see where the plot heads.
But greenette is NOT A WORD.