im sad. this will never be finished.

spinning mana shield is a fuckin kienzan

now that i think about it he can use the mana shield to attack too

i see that, you are also a man of culture. Dresden.

lox of sins. actually its great. I have fucked quite a few of my underage cousins

:(

That also means that if someone runs into two of his personas theres a pretty clear connection between the two

Merry Christmas! And a Happy New Year!

One of the few how are still waiting for a update on your amazing story. It's too good of a story to be left unfinished.

Now that the main cast are at the Academy and no doubt being monitored by Goodwitch. I'm wondering who's going to jump 'Jaune' and pin him down for a night his current girls or Ruby, Penny or Jen.
Hoping now that Blake is speaking to her parents sooner than in cannon and as part of her Jaune's legit paramilitary organization she could send money to Menagerie or with Jaune's help establish a scholarship/aid program for Kuo Kuana. Another alternative to the White Fang.

Best Wishes, from a ongoing fan.

Hey there! I hope you're doing great!

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I dont get it? If she is so fixated on Jaune and always loved him. Why wouldnt she then want to share both of their first time together? Or does she only care about the end point and not what they have done before getting together?

Maybe once a year or sometimes more, I go back and read this fic. Probably one of my favorites of the Gamer genre, and favorite fics period (right up with Professor Arc and Relic of the Future, among others) which is why it's unfortunate to see the reviews get so clogged with negativity, rather than critique. It's not a perfect fic, but if you point at any "perfect" work, I'd immediately call you a liar, cause there isn't one. It makes me happy to read this, that's all.

Hope you're doing well, whatever you're doing/wherever you're at in life.

I’m done, the incest is just… ugh. Bro, stop trying to justify it, its wrong and disgusting.

THAT'S THAT AND THIS IS THIS?
내게는 고통밖에 없습니다.
그것 말고는 아무것도 바라지 않습니다.
고통은 내게 충실했고, 지금도 변함이 없습니다.
내 영혼이 심연의 바닥을 헤멜 때에도.
고통은 늘 곁에 앉아 나를 지켜주었으니
어떻게 고통을 원망하겠습니까.
아 고통이여, 너는 결코 내게서 떠나지 않겠기에 나는 마침내 너를 존경하기에 이르렀다.
나는 이제 너를 알겠다. 너는 존재하는 것만으로도 아름답다는 것을.
너는 가난한 내 마음의 화롯가를 결코 떠나지 않았던 사람을 닮았다.
나의 고통이여, 너는 더없이 사랑하는 여인보다 다정하다.
나는 알고 있나니 내가 죽음의 자리에 드는 날에도
너는 내 마음속으로 깊이 들어와
나와 함께 가지런히 누우리라.

That's three ways you've nerfed him to die at unexpected moments. F**king pathetic. Losing spirit power he never had before could kill him now? F**k you. I kept reading and hoping you'd fix things and you added that stupid shit instead. Dropping this garbage.

Magic and Aura should be separate after all Magic is a thing in this world(Maidens and Salem).