| Reviews for The Darkness Within |
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  theosay chapter 15 . 5/1/2021 This story was thw first fanfiction I ever read. That was over 15 years ago. Time moves on but this story still resonates with me. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/10/2020 What a great tragedy (and a fantastic story). If the OVA Tenchi ever somehow came across his older corrupted self (somehow coming back in the past to kill himself in order to spare himself from such a grim future), I can imagine him putting up that "I'm in hell" face. If the Anti-Tenchi admits to choosing Ryoko, Tenchi will probably reveal that he loves each of them equally, and that he's an idiot for thinking that should he choose one, he needs to push all the others away from him to suffer thinking that he never felt the same way (his dumb misguided way of trying to "protect" them from what he thinks is a bad idea for relationships). Varied reactions aside, it will probably end with him defeating his counterpart, absorbing him into the sword, coming to terms with his uncertainties, moving on away from them, him holding an X amount of rings for each of the women he loves, finally admitting that he loves all the women in his life in "that way" (and that they're all family to him), and asking them all to finally marry him. |
| Fabiano chapter 2 . 3/5/2019 Tenchi caiu pra lado sombrio |
 Hugboat chapter 14 . 9/19/2017 I really enjoyed the reading the story, but the author should do a rewrite |
| edboy4926 chapter 15 . 10/4/2013 Good story Though sad that in both endings, Tenchi and Tokimi are not together. |
| Ryan the Game Master chapter 15 . 9/3/2010 This story, while well written, was extremely depressing, happy ending aside. You get points for great narrative. |
| Blanks chapter 1 . 2/13/2010 It has been several years since I read this fic, and I'm glad I found it again. Its going to be a treat to read this from scratch all over again. |
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 1 . 2/11/2010 *sobbing* Poor Tenchi! Poor...Poor Tenchi! |
| DemonAngel of Ice chapter 15 . 1/20/2010 Great story. This is propably only one Tenchi/Tokimi pairing on this site and I enjoyed it very much. I like how you portraited Tenchi in this story: cold, vengeful and powerful but when he is with Tokimi he is changing in his old self. I'm glad that you changed this ending for another, happier one. |
| creativesm75 chapter 15 . 12/11/2009 cool |
| SSJ5Gokurulez chapter 6 . 8/21/2009 Whoo! Go Tenchi! |
| SSJ5gokurulez chapter 5 . 8/21/2009 Incredible Tenchi's super strong! |
| SSJ5GokuRulez chapter 2 . 7/21/2009 (Sobbing)Poor Tenchi! |
| Swordbearer chapter 15 . 3/7/2006 Awesome story. Its pretty sad Good job |
| Firehedgehog chapter 15 . 1/20/2006 oih... iliked |