well i like it but Ryoko should not have senaed anything about tenchi! even if she has all 3 of the gems. What you should have done was have washu's computer beep and tell her the house was on fire ( 1 of the machines she so left behind. )... Dosen't that that sound better then Ryoko suddenly haveing new power she never had befor(even when she had the 3 gems befor kagato got ahold of her ?)...

Such an interesting story indeed. Never have I read a TenchixTokimi fic, but from what your produced, I guess that there are other great ones out there. Your story was very original and it was difficult to find any repitition that was made; maybe it is because there was none. Anyhow, awesome story. It kicks major $$. Your version of a TenchixTokimi story is quite sweet, and I hope to read the sequel. Great job.

Well, I'm mostly a T/R (and Ayeka or Sasami sometimes) fan depending on the circumstances (sometimes I don't like him/her depending what they do, I'm not a blind fan)... but I have to say end it as Tenchi/Tokimi! She really seems to love him and Ryoko... well she is the one who left him and didn't give a damn about him anymore so let her be alone or whatever. I really like this story, it's different from all the other 'the girls leave Tenchi' stories where he turns totally pathetic and mopes for them no matter what they do.

BTW, I really like Tokimi in this story.

A great ending to an amazing story. I can't wait to start reading the sequel.

Rating: 9 out of 10

;_; Omg.

Cool! Just don't make him marry that icky Ryoko! Bluh!

Wow. This is a *really* good fanfiction. I can't stress that enough; from start to finish, this is a quality story. There are a few things that keep this from becoming a great story (I'm not a big fan of how Mihoshi was used, except for the catalyst for Tenchi's transformation), yet this is a great dark Tenchi story that (at least I) would have liked to seen on TV/Manga. Keep up the good work.

Nice story and great ending! Have to admit I hope to see Evil Tenchi or at least Balance between the Tenchi's two personas in the sequal.

WOW~ Didn't expect the story to end like that. I got a kick out of the entire thing. I'll be looking out for the next part of this story.

hehehe that was a ending-ish chapter. I can't wait for the sequel! r/t 4ever

Great chapter! I loved it to death (certainly was plenty of that in this chapter). Hate to admit it, but I was rooting for Evil Tenchi. Kinda upset that he went back to being good, but then again, it wouldn't be Tenchi now would it? Lol, once again, great sory!

Good Chapter.

Hope to see Tenchi and Tokimi together at the end

of your story.

Good Chapter.

Hope to see Tenchi and Tokimi together at the end

of your story.

Good Chapter.

Hope to see Tenchi and Tokimi together at the end

of your story.

Good Chapter.

Hope to see Tenchi and Tokimi together at the end

of your story.