Hm. For a girl like me who haven't watch Hetalia, makes me wanna watch it. Just because from your story, it has intrigued me. *nods head approvingly* Hahaha anyway I'm clueless as a dodo bird right now but the plot is interesting. You seem to have a plan in stored that can make us gaped in surprised. Some grammatical errors but I know you can improve greatly if you continue to write :)

Loys of love from me! Good luck!

I like this! It's got a very intriguing beginning :)

If I were you, though, I'd change the BTT being womanizers. It goes against canon and everyone does it. Maybe have it be the Awesome Trio, Stray Trio, or Forgotten Trio instead? Idk, just a suggestion.