Reviews for Zootopia: At Our Core
twaxer chapter 6 . 7/3/2016
Excellent bad guy backstory! Well, I mean, terrible what happened, but... U know what I'm trying to say! Ugh this story is great. And I'm super glad you plan to continue it.
twaxer chapter 5 . 7/3/2016
Aw shucky darns that was sweet.
twaxer chapter 4 . 7/3/2016
Ha that was an entertaining encounter!
twaxer chapter 3 . 7/3/2016
Superb chapter once again! I just really love the tone of this story. I like all the realistic police jargon and protocol, so please don't worry about that! And as far as people saying that you shouldn't separate dialogue? If the same character is speaking, then most times yeah you should keep it all connected in the same little paragraph or whatever. But every time someone different starts speaking, you should definitely separate the dialogue. To avoid confusion. Anyway, can't wait to read more! You da bomb.
twaxer chapter 2 . 7/3/2016
"Hope it's fine." Pshhhh, modest enough? Lolol but for real tho! That was an awesome chapter! I've been looking for a story like this for a while! These two animals doing what they do. Love it. Your writing flows very well.
twaxer chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
This is pretty awesome so far! Excellent storytelling, and I love the friendship between Nick and Judy. Can't wait to read more.
AmateurWriter02 chapter 9 . 7/1/2016
Not trying to seem rude or anything... but I'm waiting for the next story. Plz don't make me wait any longer! :P
Mariner12 chapter 8 . 6/29/2016
Wonderful story! I don't know much about police protocol, but I'm glad to know it was portrayed accurately in this story! That's part of the reason I'm nervous about writing any Zootopia fanfics, haha. Anyways, I think what I liked most about this was the strong sense of suspense in the final few chapters. You really kept me hooked! I'll definitely be looking for the sequels you mentioned. And Hornsby was a great villian. He was despicable, but his motives were understandable, which is what made him realistic. He served as a great foil for Judy. Keep up the great writing!
Heigler chapter 9 . 6/19/2016
amazing story bro, really first time i saw a facfic of zootopia when judy and nick only are just a best friends, in your fic they trust each-other and willing give their live for the other, good luck in your new step on your life Air-Force :). im waiting for the next story of you trilogy. Cya
spyrofan34 chapter 9 . 6/19/2016
Just wanted to say I loved the story alot
NickelAz chapter 9 . 6/12/2016
I absolutely love this story! After watching Zootopia, I had a certain emptiness I felt, but this story allowed me to add on to where the movie left off. I've never actually read fanfiction before, but now I'm glad I did. I'm really looking forward to the next two stories! D
MikeyMoo23 chapter 2 . 5/31/2016
God this is amazing and I'm only on the second chapter!
Niori chapter 8 . 5/31/2016
This was a spectacular story. Excellent work.
CDV42 chapter 9 . 5/29/2016
Man, i've been reading soo much Zootopia fanfics, i just... CAN'T STOP IT!
And wow... This one was a very good one, can't wait for the sequel
Hopefully you can settle your situation soon!
kittyKat010 chapter 9 . 5/29/2016
HI I just read your story strait and now it's 3 am. Anyway I am looking forward to the sequel of this and I really wanna read the other story you talked about. It sounds really fun or not exactly fun, but really good and interesting and I totally wanna read it. Anyway I loved the story you were great at keeping them in character I must say and it was a generally good story that was easy and not confusing to follow with a nice plot that evolved in a good way that made sense. Good job
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